Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, at the time of fast developing technology, significance of libraries has been declining. Therefore, I personally agree with the statement that universities should sponsor students` sport activities in the same degree than they support libraries. There are a few reasons why I feel this way.
One of the reasons is that sport activities facilitate to students health, and not just physical, but psychological as well. The students put a myriad efforts on their studies, and very often feel stressed out. This way, sport is a marvelous way to relieve the tension. For instance, some students like to run, and it enables them to forget about difficulties and obstacles they experience in the university. If students have available, well organized stadiums, they are likely to obtain some psychological rest in there and continue studying after, with even more energy and enthusiasm. Although importance of having libraries, in order to enhance students knowledge, is high, having an opportunity to maintaining students health cannot be overseen. To that end, funding the sport activities by universities is crucial for students to feel better.
Another reason is that through sports students are likely to evolve pivotal skills, such as effective communication with others. Participating in activities such as volleyball and basketball, or other group activities in the university can help introverted persons to overcome social anxiety and success in studies. If a student do not hesitate ask questions and advice from professors and other students, he tends to deal easily with the learning process and to enhance his intelligence. Despite tremendous information provided in books, sometimes students learn more from their classmates and scholars. Because of that, espousing sport activities, can bring to the students more advantageous outcomes than libraries.
To sum it up, I feel that universities definitely should spend the same amount of money on developing sports, that they do for libraries. This is because, sports contribute to students` wellbeing and help them to excel. All things considered, it is reasonable to assume that sports in the universities deserve the same attention than libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11358890909 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581871345029 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1212108172 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34198577071 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104023998687 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888504761876 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227777080499 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571222192511 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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