Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Whenever it comes to the issue that whether a person should never make an important decision alone or not, there are never short of discussions and arguments. Although making decision with someone sounds appealing to some extent, because it apparently rely on someone's advice and suggestion, as far as I am concerned, I would still prefer making decision alone. Even though there stand hundreds of reasons behind my preference, I would only explore some of them here.
First of my reasoning would be that a person should do own decision based on their experience, knowledge and ability to do the things that they planned. No one know your situation even you explained well because behind that situation there are lot of thing belong with them. For instance, one of my friend always asks me advice before she make decision but when I give suggestion she always rejected my suggestion but after long hours of chat she make decision by herslef. This example showing that they not only rely on someone's decision because they know that the suggestions are not based on their situation.
Secondly, in addition to own ability to make decision, a person tend to stay stable with their decision. If they do the thing as another persons advice, after the negative result they usually blame them instead of understand their own fault. This thing used to happen when we were young, we ask advice from our parents, then when it goes wrong, they starts to cry and give negative emotion to their parents because of results. I have my own example of this statement, when I was nine years old I asked my mom to go to chess club or dance club, she offered me chess club which is possible to improve my brain, and as an usual I choose chess club. But few years later, at middle school talent show, my dance moves were like wooden doll and kids laughed at me lot. That time I feel angry about mom because, I thought she insist me to go chess club. But, it is a just disagreement of kid who have not explore the social yer.About an adult, we should do our decision without blaming anyone.
Last but not least, learning from the mistake is most important contribution in life. If your decision is failed, you have to learn from that. If you made decision with the one who have experienced and when it gives positive result, you can not learn anything. For example, most billionare are the person who failed at least once in their life which showing that they learned from the mistake.
Therefore, when it comes to their decision, whether a parson should never make an important decision alone or not, as far as their offered a choice, I would always prefer making decision alone without any doubt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'relies'?
Suggestion: relies
...g to some extent, because it apparently rely on someones advice and suggestion, as f...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
...e extent, because it apparently rely on someones advice and suggestion, as far as I am c...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...stance, one of my friend always asks me advice before she make decision but when I giv...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...friend always asks me advice before she make decision but when I give suggestion she...
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Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...estion but after long hours of chat she make decision by herslef. This example showi...
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Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wing that they not only rely on someones decision because they know that the sugg...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...cision. If they do the thing as another persons advice, after the negative result they ...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
... parents, then when it goes wrong, they starts to cry and give negative emotion to the...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is possible to improve my brain, and as an usual I choose chess club. But few year...
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Line 3, column 818, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'insists'.
Suggestion: insists
... angry about mom because, I thought she insist me to go chess club. But, it is a just ...
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Line 3, column 897, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'explored'.
Suggestion: explored
...a just disagreement of kid who have not explore the social yer.About an adult, we shoul...
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Line 3, column 920, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: About
...kid who have not explore the social yer.About an adult, we should do our decision wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66596194503 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36595929075 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490486257928 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7614173986 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.157894737 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8947368421 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285156235016 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900539304074 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082631847923 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177224699401 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625668238478 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.