Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
There is no doubt that making decision is one of the most prominent things which show how much one person's personality grow. No one can blind eye to this factor's influence on children's lives. A controversial question is raised related to the issue is that how much do the children rely on their parents when they want to decide? Some people may hold this viewpoint that today, children depend more on their parents in decision times than past. However, others look this concept from different lens. In my perspective, the second belief which is that children in past relied more on their parents when they wanted to make a decision, is true. I will pinpoint some of outstanding reasons in the following.
One of the most principal reason coming mind related to the statement is that through age of in formation explosion, nowadays, parents are not so up to date about their children's lives. This means that most of children's opinions are completely various with their parents. Therefore, children find that their parents do not help them in most of aspects of their lives. Take the personal experience as an example. When I want to choose my major in university, I asked about this to my father and understood that he did not any knowledge about the new majors and his knowledge was only related to the typical majors. Eventually, I did not utilize his help and selected by myself. This illustrates that children today, do not relay on their parents knowledge when they make a decision.
Furthermore, the other equally predominant reason supported my idea is that today, parents find that allowing the children to select alone can help to boost their self confidence. From psychological stand point, when one child makes one decision by himself, he will feel independency and it is far better for his future life owing to this fact that in his future life or career, there will be plenty number of situation which he would decide alone without other's help. Consequently, the parents, interpret this important factor's effect on their children's personality and do not interfere to their decisions and permit them to choose their way individually.
The last but not the least reason is that in the past time, the children always lived with their parents and their parents always know their problems and their living matters. So, they was able to put their perspective on the children's decision and in most time change the erroneous decisions. On the other hand, todays, children give their parents up as soon as possible to experience their independent lives and often, their parents do not have any information about the children. Besides, the children in modern days want to demonstrate their ability and growth and one of tools to perform this decide by self and do not accept other's opinion and consultant, although sometimes the make the wrong decision.
From what has been mentioned above, we can easily reach the conclusion that todays, children lay much less on their parents than the past when they want to make a decision. All in all, it is anticipated that children will tend to decide alone more and more because of above said reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the aspects') or simply say ''most aspects''.
Suggestion: most of the aspects; most aspects
... that their parents do not help them in most of aspects of their lives. Take the personal exper...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...but not the least reason is that in the past time, the children always lived with their p...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'no doubt', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222222222222 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.158974358974 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0700854700855 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0666666666667 0.046263068375 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0837606837607 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112820512821 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0188034188034 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55705033579 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034188034188 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0017094017094 0.00188951952338 90% => OK
Determiners: 0.0820512820513 0.0887237588012 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153846153846 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0239316239316 0.0139019557991 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3147.0 2387.08602151 132% => OK
No of words: 535.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88224299065 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330841121495 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241121495327 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171962616822 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11214953271 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55705033579 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465420560748 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.6842466813 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2608695652 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1003698719 48.84282405 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.826086957 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2608695652 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 47.3730190979 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.14364640884 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381901282672 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111768532904 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0739737928003 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504658082402 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17178549592 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14534877884 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807543051262 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.41744999261 0.336927656856 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0435424061219 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254318113847 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493916126795 0.0618886996521 80% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.4623655914 366% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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