Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s business life, some jobs require to work quickly while others require fast. It depens on quality of job and people’s ability. Even if people are to be master of their job they should pay attention and make sure that everyting is right. In my opinion, secure working is preferred whatever those conditions are. I will explain two important arguments about my opinion.
Firtsly, a job that is made quickly by someone might cause serious problems. Workers sometimes think that this job is not important and they make it quickly but they do not think its effect when a problem find out. For example, My father had a collegue at his old job. one day My father’s friend wanted to done quickly his job. He left his job uncompletely and left the factory to do his private work. However, He forgot to inform to my father about status of job because of he was hurry. My father wounded due to his collegue’s lack of responsbility.
Secondly the fact that, working slowly generally can guarantee high quality products. On the other hand, that saves to maintain cost and to spend time for maintaining. For example, Asus that is one of the big companies is very good example for this case. When Asus entered the smartphone sector it was less striking but at the moment most people use one of Asus smartphones. I observed closely this brand and I saw that for this company high quality is important and so they was not hurry to increas their sale. At the end they obtained good market piece and they struggle with other big smarthone companies.
To sum up, working slowly ensure high quality as well as secure work environment. In my opinion, employee and worker should not forget that they affect people’s life with their making.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because he' instead.
Suggestion: because he
...inform to my father about status of job because of he was hurry. My father wounded due to his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79934210526 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61605412394 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1587975694 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.95 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14999062844 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04734881735 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397876930993 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102530850134 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377462597098 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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