Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Means of transportation has been an appealing topic in our modern society. People nowadays widely argue that in the next two decades car will be less popular than it is now. Personally, I disapprove of this argument.
In the first place, what I put in my priority is danger to economy. It cannot be denied that if there are fewer and fewer cars in upcoming years, people are likely to travel by bus, by subway, or by bike. This present a problem because in fact, cars have always been the most popular vehicles for many years, thereby infrastructures in almost every city in the world being dedicated to them only. As a result, to avoid the habit of using cars, it is required that Governments pay a great deal to reconstruct the city in order to fit alternative means of transportation. This proves to severely destroy national budget in many countries. More importantly, currently, there are a lot of giant cooperations which produces and sells cars. These companies will be hurt, leading to bankrupt if people tend to use less cars in the future. As they contribute tremendously to economy in some countries, their degradation proves to hurt these countries. Indeed, decreasing the use of cars need to be highly considered as it may cause damage to the world economy.
In the second place, personal enjoyment hold no less important. The fact is that people will find it difficult to give up using cars in the near future due to their convenience. Admittedly, driving cars, people are possible to get to every place they want, regardless of whether it is in city center or in remote area. When it comes to using public transport or private bikes, some destinations are unreachable: using bike, people can not travel to remote areas; using public transport, they are required to walk a lot when their intended places are not near stations. More amazingly, keeping driving cars, people are likely to enjoy absolute privacy, which has not been able to be found in any other vehicles yet. Indeed, drivers are able to do whatever they fancy in their private cars such as talking to their children about their current performance at school, listening to their favourite rock music, etc. It seems that in the future, new, modern vehicles will be invented, ensuring privacy for drivers, and they tend to totally outweigh cars. However, in the next two decades, cars will still be the only vehicle that can bring freedom to users. With no doubt, cars satisfy drivers for convenience and privacy they bring.
On the other hand, some people may insist that cars should strongly be avoided using since they will use up more and more gasoline. As a result, our environment will be severely damaged. However, this is not necessarily the case as scientists and car-producing cooperations are trying hard to make cars as environmentally friendly as possible by using electricity as energy instead of gasoline. Furthermore, the more people use cars, the more aware they will be in protecting our environment. As a consequence, they are likely to use their car sufficiently to reduce the amount of gasoline consumed as well as air thrown out. By and large, the idea that keep using cars in the upcoming decades may damage our environment is often possible to end in collapse.
In conclusion, these mentioned above are convincing reasons for my approval. It is strongly recommended that people worldwide should take my writing into careful consideration to make appropriate decisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 808, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ading to bankrupt if people tend to use less cars in the future. As they contribute ...
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Line 7, column 760, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is often possible to end in collapse. In conclusion, these mentioned above are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, by and large, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2896.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94197952218 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.771560121 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491467576792 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 927.0 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.344015931 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8620689655 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2068965517 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1724137931 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218946819605 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610253667788 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551665268924 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117036008918 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640626630554 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 86.8835125448 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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