Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is impossible for a town to grow without a good public transformation system.
Various factors impact upon improving a town such as proper public facilities, existance of job opportunities and the quility of urban space and its environment. Urban facilities include different elements that one of them is public transportation system. I am of the opinion that a good public transportation system cause a town to grow. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people commute easily and expeditiously using an appropriate public transportation system, therefore, they have less trouble. Inherently, people like living in a city where they are more comfortable and have less mental problems. Nowadays, traffic jam bring about a lot of problems for people who live in big cities, meanwhile, people detest traffic and waiting in long rows. So, if a city has a complicated and suitable public transportation system, people are inclined to live there because not only they have more amenities but also they can save more mony and their stipend decreses. furthermore, it cause people to have no concern about where they live in this city and they can easily reach their work place on time, even if they live in a far distance compared to their office. Consequently, this situation helpa city improve and grow faster because people inclination to this city cause more works, creating more job opportunities and more investment. As we know, for example, in the New York city, there is one of themost sophisticated transportation system which cause a large number of people to come and live there. what’s more, these people play an effective role in this city through investing in different aspects and working in various realms. as a result, it can be said that a good transportation system make a city bigger and more developed by absorbing people and establishing many new opportunities by these people.
Secondly, one of the effects of a good transportation system is to have less pollution. As we know, nowadays, one of the arguable world problems is global warming and air pollution which are the result of creating and increasing much carbon dioxid gas,CO2, which is the output gas from automobile and motorcycle. Due to taht fact, one way of diminishing the amount of CO2 in the air is reducing the use of private transportation like car and motorcycle and using the public transportation service like electrical train and bus. on the other hand, people usually deny using public transportation systems because they think these systems are out of date, decrepit and crowded. therefore, one way of encouraging people to use these is founding an appropriate and new transportation systems. For this raeson, a city which use such a complex public transportation system, will have healthier and cleaner environment and milieu withless contamination in air and water. Moreover, a healthier city attracts more people from different places since people notice their physical conditions and take pleasure in living at a clean city. additionally, touristindustry in these cities can be enhanced because of their clean surroundings. improvment of tourist industry bring about more money and budget for these cities and the incomes can be spent and invest in diverse facets and parts such as improving urban green space, parks, libraries, entertainment centers, making more jobs, founding educational buildings and so on. if all the factors are contemplated, we can reach a conclusion that a good public transportation system help a city improve and enhance.
To sum it up, I strongly believe that a good transportation systems directly and indirectly influence the improvment of a town. This is because it brings about more expeditious and easier commute and intensifies the accessible level, and because it causes clear urban environmeant and development of tourist industry.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'i feel', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268786127168 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.138728323699 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102601156069 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462427745665 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0390173410405 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112716763006 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0419075144509 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04929876507 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0158959537572 0.0309702414327 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0014450867052 0.00188951952338 76% => OK
Determiners: 0.0809248554913 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115606936416 0.0209618222197 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130057803468 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3871.0 2387.08602151 162% => OK
No of words: 621.0 408.028673835 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23349436393 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376811594203 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273752012882 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19001610306 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141706924316 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04929876507 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471819645733 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.220780053 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 24.84 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8555352995 48.84282405 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.84 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.84 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.68 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.2152012882 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.89032258065 1.45489161554 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155508563197 0.300154397459 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136588892947 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724227315977 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497810563979 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123528193199 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741480857226 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599522905317 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40362587729 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129579022646 0.067059652881 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139339938141 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471694754295 0.0618886996521 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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