Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems
After the tech revolution in last few decades and the tremendous process in this field. The Internet today is driving everything around us, it has the control over everything, if someone wants to know any information, he goes directly to the Internet. When somebody wants to go to any place he searches it first on the web, even if he want to eat, he looks for that food on the net. So it is kind of mania we can say (Internet mania). Some people think that Internet had a bad impact on the public because it provides them with inaccurate information. However, other people believe in the benefits of Internet, they think the advantages are way more than the disadvantages.
It goes without saying, the Internet in the easiest way to get information. Also, it is an affordable resource and so convenience. As the life today is too hard and has fast paced. Definitely, people would choose the easiest way, they do not want to overwhelm themselves with extra work, like going to a library or asking someone. Therefore they prefer the Internet. Besides, nowaday Internet is like a magic wand, write the question then press enter, all the answers come up on the screen. To illustrate that more clearly, I remember when I began looking for a school to my son, I found everything I wanted there. The Internet is an indispensable tool, without it I have to go to many places and ask many people, so Internet saved my time and efforts.
Admittedly, the Internet contains a lot of misleading information, inaccurate resource, and faking news because everyone can write and upload videos about any topics without any control from anyone. So people cannot rely on Internet's information. Instead, they have to look for a reliable resource to get what they want. A recent TV show highlights the Internet abuse and how some people used it to published fake news and false information to get some financial or personal benefits. More ever, they gave an example of cosmetics company which writes fake reviews and information to cheat the customers and persuade them to buy this product.
In conclusion, the Internet is a turning point in our life, it makes our life easiest than before and help us in a different way. On the other hand, the Internet also has a lot of harmful influence to our life. So we have to be aware regarding its information to get the maximum benefits and to exclude the wrong information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...earches it first on the web, even if he want to eat, he looks for that food on the n...
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...e going to a library or asking someone. Therefore they prefer the Internet. Besides, nowa...
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...so Internet saved my time and efforts. Admittedly, the Internet contains a lot ...
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...and persuade them to buy this product. In conclusion, the Internet is a turning...
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...ur life easiest than before and help us in a different way. On the other hand, the Internet also h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72553699284 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70333360864 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541766109785 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2543596396 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245777362504 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757355484088 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772749011028 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14743999251 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415258858896 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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