Do you agree or disagree: “In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.”?
In modern era, working plays a profound role in people's lives. People usually spend the longer part of their life working. The controversial issue which has been raised recently regarding working is what to do to become more successful in your work. The majority of people strongly believe that one has to work quickly and risk making mistakes. On the other hand, there are some people who contradict this idea and hold the opposite view which is one should work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. I personally concur with the former concept and contend that it is more plausible. In the following two paragraphs, I will try to aptly pinpoint the most remarkable reasons of my point of view.
First of all, from my own perspective, one of the most dominant reasons is that if one conducts his job quickly and risks making some probable mistakes, he can finish his homework much sooner. As a result, he will have adequate time to check that and find the probable mistakes. Let me mention an example for this reason. Assume that one is going to do his homework and give that to his professor. If he checks all the stages of his job precisely and makes sure that everything is correct, he will not have sufficient time for conducting that and will lose some points. He can do it as fast as he can and check the whole after finishing.
In my opinion, another leading reason to take into account is that in today's world no one can become successful without risking and it has changed to an indispensable part of people's lives. According to a recent research done by scholars of Princeton University, people who are brave and take calculated risks for doing a job are much more successful in their daily life. They usually have better ideas compared to other people and accomplish everything they face. In fact, this characteristic can alter one’s life dramatically.
In short, according to all the aforementioned reasons, one can conclude that it is worth working quickly and risk some mistakes since this way, one will be able to finish his job sooner and check that several times, and in today's world, one cannot improve his life and get a social reputation without risking. But that was a story in a nutshell; as a matter of fact, there are some more reasons and examples, and may be more challenging, which are not mentioned above. Eventually, it is highly recommended that in order to succeed and reach the highest degree in everything, one should try this type of risking at least once.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...try this type of risking at least once.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, so, as to, at least, in fact, in short, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72665148064 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5850029264 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50569476082 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8213130545 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212795445283 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617725617334 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577786512739 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126865646837 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056802593708 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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