getting advice from people who are older than you is more valuable than from people of your age.
When it comes to getting advice i always prefer experienced people. Older people in family and friends are always ready to give you free advice for all good. So in my experience i will ask older people for a advice rather than people of my same age. My arguments for this point are listed below.
At very first , old people are full of experience and knowledge. Eventhough if you dont share same interest they can guide you better than unexperienced people. for example, when i was confused while selecting my major in University my grandma helped me to choose it based on her experience and my int...
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Though people of your age has more experience than you
Though people of your age have more experience than you
Sentence: Eventhough if you dont share same interest they can guide you better than unexperienced people. for example, when i was confused while selecting my major in University my grandma helped me to choose it based on her experience and my interest.
Error: unexperienced Suggestion: inexperienced
Sentence: But older people in our family or friends always gives us best advices and strength to deal with criticle conditions In fact i would like to mention here my own experience.
Error: criticle Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Of course i didnt get job because of my nervousness but that experience definately helped me for my next interview preparation.
Error: definately Suggestion: definitely
Sentence: Third, old generation always has more optimistic charasteristics because of abundance of experience and due to that they are confident that if they are asking you to do something then it must have some kind of sense.If you 'ask your friend or family member for some help and if they dont know anything about it then things can get messed up.
Error: charasteristics Suggestion: characteristics
Error: dont Suggestion: don't
Sentence: But it was our first time so things went wrong and pizza didnt come out good.But next time we had a little help from our mother and it was the perfect pizza we had ever made or taste.
Error: didnt Suggestion: didn't
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