“The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.”
Educational institutes and universities are pillars that support the growth and advancement of any society. It provides a learning platform where the youth can attain knowledge and further help build a good future for themselves and contribute to the society as a whole. Though an asset at large ,the location for such institutes should be carefully chosen to avoid any local issues.
The recent plan for opening a university in our community is welcomed by some people . They believe it will help the locals in their educational aspiration. We now do not need to leave home and travel farther to gain quality education .The locals can alos access state of the art library and laboratory facilities. It will also help the nearby manufacturing industry with research projects. Moreover the construction and maintenance will attract a bevy of jobs Like teachers, office admins , cafeteria . It will help with the local economy. It will attract students and we will need to come up with accommodation for new immigrants lured by job and study etc. Overall it will be a win-win situation.
This step is also viewed skeptically by some members. Our community is already overcrowded and more people inhabit than the infrastructure can support . Building a university will put more pressure on the already crumbling infrastructure.The government should take note of the situation and complete development projects before the university is functional and attracts more immigrants. Secondly this area is residential and houses retirement homes for the elderly . It is close to the city but still away from the hustle and bustle , providing a calm ambience. The university will attract the college crowd and it may not be suitable for the seniors and ailing .It is better to construct university campus in the suburbs instead of increasing the congestion our community.
Thus opening a university has both its advantages and disadvantages . Everyone has an opinion based on their set of priorities . While some weigh the positives others focus on the negatives. Nonetheless it is a good step in improvement of the educational accessibility and job opportunities for all the locals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23275862069 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07670707674 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9590115846 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135934311276 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374059256652 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425801654256 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796064593501 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201436905202 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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