Has the ease of the cooking improved life?
There is no denying to the fact that food is one the most primary necessities for human. During the centuries, people are always seeking to find food, and a large crowd has suffered from diverse disease due to shortage of food and sometimes this issue ends up with death. Fortunately, we live in an era of time that the topic of food has been solved in many countries so that a plethora of people are in the conviction that due to easy accessible to food storage life get improved. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that this issue is still a matter of concern in some regions. I am of the opinion that each point of view has their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, food-issues are continuously developed along with progress in other fields. Undoubtedly, advanced technology has a crucial role in this regard. Different cooking method, growing the fresh and nutrition ingredients not only make the process of preparing the food much easier but also help the people to be far healthier. In addition, there are different devices and methods in order to preserve the food in the best possible quality that is an absolute relief for many people. Furthermore, cooking is kind of entertainment for many people. They have mixed different ingredient and make delicious food. In fact, the cooking become a popular industry that lots of people have been drawn to it hoping to experience better life.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that rapid changes and complexity of today's world present new challenges and put new demands on different societies. Poverty is still one of the critical obstacles in some undeveloped countries. In Africa, numerous kids have died as food is unreachable for them. In many south America countries, people commit various crimes because they are dying owing to starve. Furthermore, drastic statistics are shown that these poor countries have mostly possessed rich resources of oil and gas, and this adversity have been imposed due to excessive greed of others developed countries to reach their lucrativeا resources.
On the basis of the point mentioned above, I am convinced that food has two distinct aspects in people's life. For some of them becomes the tool of enjoying more from their life, and for the rest is a main driver for dealing with endless miseries. Therefore, it is a duty of each individual, as a human, not to allow this inequity continues in the world.
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... seeking to find food, and a large crowd has suffered from diverse disease due to...
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... this inequity continues in the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241970021413 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.169164882227 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109207708779 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449678800857 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0256959314775 0.0685040099705 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13704496788 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0556745182013 0.0351676179071 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68829202007 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299785867238 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00214132762313 0.00188951952338 113% => OK
Determiners: 0.0985010706638 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00428265524625 0.0209618222197 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00856531049251 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2546.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 427.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.962529274 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339578454333 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276346604215 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175644028103 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138173302108 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68829202007 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566744730679 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.5862699233 59.2087087015 114% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.35 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5421186992 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.9846604215 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.8125 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344137332904 0.300154397459 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0761321307835 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0549002286193 0.0752933317313 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471207026079 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141665804489 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133252092253 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110209384747 0.0781384742642 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389808385886 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104716050525 0.067059652881 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263749378413 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106823137661 0.0618886996521 173% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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