If you could go back to some time and place in the past, when and where would you go? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
Since we are growing and getting older, we should look backward and think about what we could do if we go back to a specific time and place in the past. This will help us to use our experience in order to prevent to repeat mistakes and try to use current opportunities more efficiently. If I could go back to my master period in 2012, I would do many different things. Actually, my master is a bitter nostalgia to me. I am really regretful that why I didn’t do more researches and connected with knowledgeable professors and established a good relationship with people as well as the girl whom I really loved her. For these, I have some explanations which you can read them in following paragraphs.
First, I could do a lot of researches because there were many students which could be my project’s sample; thing that I have a serious problem in it. Furthermore, I could participate in more workshops which hold by different professors. I could learn more about statistical softwares and methodology of doing research. Another thing that I would do if I had returned to university is that I could be a research assistant. I had some chances to apply for such positions but I neglect them. If I had applied all of mentioned things, I could have a very good resume.
Second, I could establish good relationship with various people to help in me to pursue my education and develop my business. If I hadn’t thought and studied only for grades, I would have a network of people who could help me to set up a new business or perform a joint research. I know some people that established a group at university and started to design robots. Now, their products are bought by a famous company. So, ignoring to have a good relationship with others put me in a serious trouble because I don’t have access those people now.
Third, I had some mistakes in my romantic life too. If I had proposed to my favorite girl, I could have a good romance life now. But, I just tried to be patient and postponed it. After a while, I got an invitation card which asked me to participate in her wedding ceremony with one of my best friends. This was even worse than other opportunities that I missed.
As the results, all of us should be aware about opportunities and try to do things in a right time and at the right place. What I have understood about life is that time will never return to the past. So, we should be sharp to catch thing. We should know that regret never bring us to the past to compensate our mistakes. I will never return to my master period as you will never back to a minute ago. This is happening for all of us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to my master period in 2012, I would do many different things. Actually, my master is a bitter...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'joint research'.
Suggestion: joint research
... me to set up a new business or perform a joint research. I know some people that established a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, so, third, well, while, another thing, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48340248963 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77784095511 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47510373444 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7633006965 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1785714286 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16520333268 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412211822079 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435926482229 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907139961137 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069246290928 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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