Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that vast alterations in the world have a variety of advantages for the human. Contrary to this popular point of view, there are those who argue that people become less happy and less satisfies since it is too difficult for them to keep up with rapid changes which have been occurring in the world. However, I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that the various changes make the world worse.
First and foremost, life expectancy is determined as one of the most crucial factors which explains how happy are happy. Undoubtedly, human lives longer owing to various changes in different aspects of life such as health care, technology and even education. Today, people do not die from incurable diseases due to the advancement of medical science. They obviously plan for their long term dreams and try to conquer to the different implications which may encounter because they want to be happier than they were in the past. They are aware of this fact that this circumstance was unimaginable for the previous generation as they did not have the chance to be alive to achieve to their wishes.
Another significant factor which should be taken into consideration is that thanks to innovation technologies individuals are able to experience the things that their parents could not even envision them. People can pursue their goals because diversity of obstacles cannot restrict their path. No more children have forced to continue their inherited occupation due to their families. Human lives in the era of time that has access to wide range of information just by clicking a bottom and connect to the Internet. Indeed, the Internet is still the most influential invention of the human throughout the history. Obviously, people are much more cheerful and thankful with their lives because of the changes which have introduced them to another lifestyle.
On the basis of the point mentioned above, I am convinced that in these days, people not only are much more fulfilled and content in their lives, but also have more urges that become their motivation to lead them to the better life. Increasing the life expectancy and also existing the various developed technologies are the clues which are talking about the happiness of the man.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'such as', 'talking about', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212195121951 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.158536585366 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10487804878 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0658536585366 0.046263068375 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0560975609756 0.0685040099705 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119512195122 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0341463414634 0.0351676179071 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59790102671 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487804878049 0.0309702414327 158% => OK
Particles: 0.00243902439024 0.00188951952338 129% => OK
Determiners: 0.0926829268293 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121951219512 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0243902439024 0.0139019557991 175% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2275.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00263852243 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32981530343 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255936675462 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182058047493 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131926121372 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59790102671 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562005277045 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 64.1024682093 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6875 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4805933888 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1875 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.2811675462 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.30434782609 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119152734752 0.300154397459 40% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136840492228 0.103427244359 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944385539043 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.553851614802 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14601288773 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609904921182 0.114077575197 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040873097329 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.451030902215 0.336927656856 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.067594501748 0.067059652881 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937203548675 0.210909579961 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299498402168 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.