Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
While some people may hold a view that it is a sound choice to work independently; however, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that the working in a team project is more important. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons that persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first reason which gives adherence to my outlook is that a group project is less stressful. Indeed, as the whole duty is divided among the team members, each member possesses a small portion of entire duty and its responsibility. As a result, the responsibility is scattered between the group members too. Therefore, each member experiences less stress for the sake of the less responsibility. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the subject is my own instance. When I was a student at university, because of my major I had to participate in the various group projects. Actually, those projects were complicated and huge which you cannot handle it by yourself and you need to ask for a helping hand; and as you are not capable of covering its complete aspects by yourself, you face a lot of stressful situations. However, since I shared their difficulties between the entire group. I was assured that while I am accountable for my own trivial ratio of this project, its reset is done by other team members accurately.
The next factor embraced my idea is that it leads to better social interaction. Unfortunately, nowadays based on the hectic lifestyle, people spend a few hours with others. So, they suffer from the lack of social communication. Even in some cases individuals do now nothing about the social activity and interaction. Hence, they group project is a good opportunity to prepare the people for the social communication and helps them to expand their soical networks. According to the noteworthy, intelligence survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-five present of students in the high school of Tehran, learn social interaction by their team project participants.
Nevertheless, some people may assume that the by working lonely, there are able to finish the project sooner in comparison of the team working. Since it is an arduous task to arrange and make an appointment between the lots of people with their various daily programs. However, they overlook a subtle point that although the arrangement and preparation for starting a group project is difficult to handle, after the first meeting and separation of the duties, the project progresses in a fluent and fast way with fewer halts, because the duties are tackling and controlling by its own expert.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the working in the team project is more important; inasmuch as, the team project is less stressfull; in addition, it is a decent practice for the soical interaction, and it progresses fluently. All in all, I highly recommend that the wise way to address a big project is the teamwork.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217543859649 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.142105263158 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0982456140351 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491228070175 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0701754385965 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122807017544 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0298245614035 0.0351676179071 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9774722814 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00175438596491 0.00188951952338 93% => OK
Determiners: 0.124561403509 0.0887237588012 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0122807017544 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00877192982456 0.0139019557991 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3064.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 512.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.984375 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361328125 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279296875 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177734375 0.174417080927 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130859375 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9774722814 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 64.5951399737 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2608695652 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4847418922 48.84282405 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.217391304 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2608695652 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.652173913043 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 50.1905570652 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.41610738255 1.45489161554 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268049607333 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.082079544089 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0719355183572 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509354697654 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163509921176 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108822365008 0.114077575197 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665775825337 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398094721239 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0826842847919 0.067059652881 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198607770012 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217052930292 0.0618886996521 35% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.