It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
When it comes to the issue whether borrowing money from a friend can harm the friendship, some people believe that it not only does not damage friendship, but also can strengthen bond between friends. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reasons is that friends have and obligation each others on difficult situations. As we all know, the financial problem has always existed, and some times we can not solve them lonely. In this way, we can appreciate more our friendship when our friends help us to cope with it. In fact, when a friend borrows money to us, we have more enthusiasm to keep our relationship, and surely; we will have a strong bond in the future. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. Four years ago when I had faced the lack of budget for establishing my electronic firm, I did not find any way to solve this problem unless loan money with high interest from a bank. At that time, one of my friends noticed my situation and accepted to borrow this money. His assistance allowed me to better manage better my business. Now, I comprehend the essential of having friends in life and try to strengthen my friendship. Hence, borrowing money not only can not destroy our relationship with friends, but also lead us to improve our friendship.
A further point we must consider is that we can gain the firmer knowledge of our friendship with lending our borrowing money. I admit that we can not ask financial aid from all our friends, while when we speak about best friends the scenario is different. They always are ready to assist us in challenging situation as much as possible. In addition, a real friend surely pays back his debts and keeps up the trust. So, we can better understand our real friends by borrowing or lending money. I think that there is not a better instance than myself when I was studying in the university. At that time, I had needed money for the university tuition, while none of ones, who I think are my friends, did not accept to borrow money unless Martin. So, I identified who is my best friend and always is ready to help me.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that borrowing money from best friends never can damage our friendship. In addition, lending or borrowing money allows us to have deeper knowledge about our friendship. Last but not least, I hope that people being more responsible to pay their debits on time, and avoid of making friend go because of money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
...friends the scenario is different. They always are ready to assist us in challenging situa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205825242718 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.168932038835 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0621359223301 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0660194174757 0.046263068375 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.11067961165 0.0685040099705 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106796116505 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0349514563107 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53543293227 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0271844660194 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00388349514563 0.00188951952338 206% => OK
Determiners: 0.0757281553398 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233009708738 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155339805825 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2618.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 463.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65442764579 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308855291577 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213822894168 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144708423326 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105831533477 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53543293227 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481641468683 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.5771904511 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.52 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9538393486 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.72 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.52 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 39.9022894168 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.00561797753 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301706978736 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0981488702403 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0793855438758 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.41289084661 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114508169399 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102392852413 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589136923015 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399378428038 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0904146432345 0.067059652881 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233377636474 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194674120196 0.0618886996521 31% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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