People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work?
In societies of today, there has been an overwhelming weight of obsession on people’s mind regarding having a great job. In fact, finding and commencing a valuable work is an inevitable and crucial juncture in the life of most human beings. Although a large number of people hold the opinion that having a high salary is a significant hallmark for working, I believe that feeling personal satisfaction and having considerable respect are can be considered the most important advantages of choosing an occupation.
First and foremost, nowadays what has helped people to feel satisfaction in their lives is having a worthwhile job. It goes without saying that finding a decent job plays such an important role that a person fulfillment is heavily based on. As a matter of fact, people spend most of their time at work, so if they do not enjoy their jobs, they will definitely lose the best of moments of their life. To illustrate, for the past two years I worked in a laboratory and I had a high income. As a consequence, my family and friends supposed that I am a happy and successful person because they believe that the amount of money indicates how much you feel contentment in your life. Whereas I analyzed my situation and I found that for me, high salary could not convince me to continue my occupation. In fact, I feel contentment when a worthwhile job brings a revolution and satisfaction in my life. Moreover, According to recent research done in my country, there are a lot of people who are occupied in jobs which have a high income but they do not enjoy your lives. Hence, having personal satisfaction has an important role in occupying.
In addition, having a good career left profound impacts on social standing and being a respectful person among people. It is crystal-clear that gaining considerable respect is a significant merit of having a purposeful work. Although some people believe that money indicates the amount of being respectful in a job, I am in touch with a large number of people who do not have a high income but they are admired by people in all over the world. In fact, in my personal opinion, the value of their works cannot be measured by any monetary value. For example, even though teachers are a part of society who do not have a high salary, they are appreciated by all of people throughout the globe because they dedicate her life to make the biggest contribution to the society. Without doubt, they have a significant role in nurture a large number of children who are supposed to attend the society in the near future. As a result, some occupation like teaching not only are admired, but also make high social standing for people who have this job in all of the society and no matter how much money they can provide. Hence, one of the strong reasons for working is earning respect.
In a nutshell, in the competitive world of today having a valuable job is a vital goal for all of people. Everyone has own reasons for choosing a work. Actually, some people work avidly for acquiring money but earning money is not a crucial factor for a vast number of people. For example, why they choose to be a teacher whereas they know this job does not have a high income? In fact, some people do not seem to mind about the amount of money which they earn but surely they feel content about themselves and have respect in society. In fact, in my vantage point, feeling personal satisfaction and being respectful are main factors for working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...respectful in a job, I am in touch with a large number of people who do not have a high income bu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221068249258 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.179525222552 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0949554896142 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0311572700297 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0623145400593 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143916913947 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0637982195846 0.0351676179071 181% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.68950923371 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.013353115727 0.0309702414327 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106824925816 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00741839762611 0.0209618222197 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178041543027 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3483.0 2387.08602151 146% => OK
No of words: 613.0 408.028673835 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68189233279 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339314845024 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238172920065 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15986949429 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0929853181077 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68950923371 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425774877651 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.3893636783 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5769230769 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7490673958 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.961538462 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5769230769 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.653846153846 0.644075263715 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 47.3942150834 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.57065217391 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238312515762 0.300154397459 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.093137286303 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0605916303285 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.445081276727 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140793118066 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876687863911 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630867913779 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.506653178724 0.336927656856 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0623283536472 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184154609092 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051916601686 0.0618886996521 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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