With education is increasingly involving in our lives, we have a new important question that whether education should be available for everyone or just for good students? Education is the acquisition of knowledge, skills and understanding necessary for new generations to take their place in life. In my essay, i will show two important reasons why education should be available to all students.
First of all, an education that everyone envolved is more innovative. With the development of human history we saw that the best creators and good students are not same. For instance, Steve Jobs who found apple phone and mac book is not a good student even he could not finish Reed College but he did amazing things with him learning and Steve Jobs is not only one. We have many examples like Bill Gates founder of Windows operating system, Steve Ballmer old CEO of Microsoft. Their experiences teach us people should have opportunity not just the good ones.
The second and another important reason that, everyone can develop themselves they just need being educated. Progressing is like shine of stars when the sun shines, all of them can shine. To give an example, my close friend Semih, smartest man in the world, could not find time to show himself as a good student. When he likely started to collage in Ege University, he meet with cybersecurity researcher Melih which is also my close friend in Ege University. With the way of Melih has shown he suddenly wake up and started to become good student. It can be referred that if education is available to all students, everyone gets the same chance.
To sum up, innovator education and to find new shining star it is important that education should be shared. Personally i believe that, it can be times when things go bad and education is a way to fix it. It has been something bad in all of us, and it has changed over time why do not catch everyone this opportunity with education?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77151335312 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6505111477 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2366895361 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314056206505 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103838452574 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917297989494 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199205265939 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076911302925 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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