Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the bustling lives of the modern days, many people might find theere is not enough time to fit in a proper meal three times a day as it is advised. To this regard, many are inclined to pick up food from food stands and restaurants and eat as they tend to their daily errands. This change of life style has had major impacts on the society's health and the well being of people. To overcome this problem many would prefer designating certain hours of a day to prepare a healthy dish and eat at home. Although I agree that eating at a sumptuous restaurant every now and then is thrilling, I believe it can give rise to many severe problems if it turns into a daily habit.
One of the major threats the general health of societies, specially developed countries, are confronted with today is obesity. The rate of obesity is increasing every day, and the age of onset has declined resulting in younger kids struggling with this major health problem. Many health experts have listed fast foods, junk foods, and unhealthy eating habits as the most influential causes to this issue. When eating out becomes a daily routine, especially if the meal is provided from food stands and fast food chains, out body is introduced to ample amounts of fat and sugar, along with other toxins, every day. Thus, this routine will surely result in obesity, which is thought of as the mother of all major diseases, mainly diabetes. Another major health threat in the correspondence of an unhealthy eating habit with the rise of many carcinogenic tumors. Studies have proven that various cancers, such as gastrointestinal, breast, and prostate malignancies are directly related to the toxins devoured through unhealthy meals. By and large, it can be conveyed that a chronic habit to eat out can severely endanger one's well-being, both in the short run, and over the span of the years.
In this regard, one might argue that a family could eat at restaurants providing healthy dishes, thus countervail this fact. It is evident that these restaurants are usually quite costly and prohibitive. Therefore, many middle class families are not able to attain their meals from these restaurants on a daily basis. Also, for prosperous families this routine can be a major waste in money.
Another point worth mentioning in this regard is that for many, meal time is a cherished family time to bond and reconcile. When this time is deprived from the family, specially the kids, the family will grow farther apart from each other. The kids might in turn prefer to go to restaurants with friends and other less trusted companions. Consequently, eliminating specific time to enjoy a meal at home might have major psychological impacts on family relations.
To conclude, eating at a restaurant is a luxurious activity for friends and families provided it does not become a chronic habit. If pursued on a daily basis, it can have major health and emotional problems for people and the society. To this regard, I highly advise families to fit in hours every day to prepare a healthy dish and enjoy the bonding and affection of eating at a table with family members, thus sustaining family ties and ensuring a healthy life style.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 557, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...e that eating at a sumptuous restaurant every now and then is thrilling, I believe it can give ris...
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Line 3, column 1119, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... habit to eat out can severely endanger ones well-being, both in the short run, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 548.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84306569343 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59245627916 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487226277372 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7948436696 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176261931138 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516705818382 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556123008779 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105664805577 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053853124994 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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