Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in the current progressive and sophisticated world where we live, Internet plays a vital role in people lives and it has many advantages. In this regards, some people believe that they receive a lot of valuable information from Internet, others believe otherwise and claim that Internet creates problems by providing information. In my opinion, I support the first group for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Internet helps people to make doctor's appointment quickly, which means it makes easy to receive treatment during emergencies. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Two years ago, my parents suddenly got pain in his left hand and left leg. Evidently, his left side of the whole body was paralyzed within few days. consequently, We were worried for treatment because that time restriction of lockdown was very strict against Covid-19 in my country. I started to search doctor's profile on Justdial online website in order to make an online appointment for him. As a result, my dad was checked up by an experienced neurologist over video call. This would not be possible without widespread Internet.
Furthermore, another equally remarkable point is that Internet contains a lot of job websites, which people can use to start careers. Additionally, there are many online universities these days which makes it possible to take classes and have a career at the same time. For instance, last year I graduated from University and after that I wanted to continue my education in abroad but I was not fluent in English language. I decided to take a English course to improve speaking and writing. One of my friends suggested to get admission in online university for saving money and time. As a result, I started my course in a high rated online university and at the same time I got job offer. Besides my English course, I was a mathematics teacher of a private school in my city. If I had not decided to learn English from online university, I would not be able to accept my teaching job.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that Internet provides people a lot of valuable information. This is because people are able to meet with doctors in emergency cases and it provides a lot of job opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... within few days. consequently, We were worried for treatment because that time restriction...
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...ockdown was very strict against Covid-19 in my country. I started to search docto...
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...For instance, last year I graduated from University and after that I wanted to co...
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... in English language. I decided to take a English course to improve speaking and ...
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...speaking and writing. One of my friends suggested to get admission in online university for savi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93316195373 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86916409714 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550128534704 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.269805552 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.380952381 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182405092414 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535342691984 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082529186557 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149306758194 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100741214884 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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