The school idea was based on getting the students guided by the teachers. Personally, though, I believe that learning under the supervision of a teacher is better than self-learning. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, being the teacher responsible for explanation of the subject, is highly recommended for getting a quick understanding of the subject. For example, in the primary school, children is fresh for the school. They are in a vital need for someone to explain the subject and helping them to solve the problems. That will make them love the school otherwise, the children will hate the school. The community would be full of ignorance.
First of all, teachers have always the required experience to make things easier. As the teacher interest is focused in one subject that would make him qualified for guiding the students through the subject. The guiding will be in terms of: explaining the subject, helping the student to solve the problems and providing them with the content. The content of the subject is one of the time saving for the students otherwise, they would spend most of their time looking for the appropriate material.
Secondly, the teacher could provide the students with a reference for the subject rather than spending of their time in the library or looking through the online books. He could help the students to solve a problem which is related to the subject, could not be solved by the student alone. The teacher could provide the students with a discussion in order to help him understand the vague topics rather than wasting time trying to understand it.
In conclusion, being the student supervised by a teacher is a crucial matter in order to save time and getting a global picture through the topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92156862745 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59635946849 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8247539028 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123432073013 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04965758214 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510224680694 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805863981851 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392879800808 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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