I strongly disagree with the idea that the same amount of money should go to the university sports activities as a university libaries.
first and formost, a university library should have the most up to date information and research databases. In my opinion, this is the influentional way to help students. By this way, pupils have the ability to use the facility and become highly educted.
Second point to take into account is that many libary open all night during exam periods. On the other hand, access to recent articles and academic facility need a tremondous amount of budget.
last but not least, spending more finacaial supports on eduaction is benefitial and worthwhile. Although, sports help them to having the healthy body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... activities as a university libaries. first and formost, a university library shoul...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...need a tremondous amount of budget. last but not least, spending more finacaial ...
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Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eduaction is benefitial and worthwhile. Although, sports help them to having the healthy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 1977.66487455 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 407.700716846 30% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1393442623 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 4.48103885553 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69627282134 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 212.727598566 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72131147541 0.524837075471 137% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 618.680645161 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9970701337 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.375 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120149078982 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445821528448 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655134361074 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745285903807 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753991145538 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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