TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso

Class and libraries:
1) main purpose of uni and colleges impart/provide academic education to the students.(hiring teachers, materials etc
2) tertiary/higher education is more difficult than school education.(need books , computers,labs and so on.
3)practical training or experiences for students (need more money, equipment, workshop,lab and so on
4)
sports and social activities
1)coaching
2)diet
3) equipment
4) hiring more people
5)

Votes
Average: 3.3 (3 votes)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...achers, materials etc 2 tertiary/higher education is more difficult than school ...
^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fficult than school education.need books , computers,labs and so on. 3practical t...
^^
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , labs
... school education.need books , computers,labs and so on. 3practical training or expe...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lab
...nts need more money, equipment, workshop,lab and so on 4 sports and social activit...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 43.0788530466 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 52.1666666667 8% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 383.0 1977.66487455 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 61.0 407.700716846 15% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27868852459 4.8611393121 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.79468239267 4.48103885553 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93842433777 2.67179642975 147% => OK
Unique words: 53.0 212.727598566 25% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.868852459016 0.524837075471 166% => OK
syllable_count: 106.2 618.680645161 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.5 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.5 100.406767564 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493720583735 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390901464804 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222165161914 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051117540795 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849924460457 0.0645574589148 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 11.7677419355 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.74 10.9000537634 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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