TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Honesty
... ' Honesty is the best policy',Honesty is universally defined as a state of be...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Human
... being just and upright towards someone.Human beings are unpredictable in nature main...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eings are unpredictable in nature mainly because of the diversity and unique chal...
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Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Honesty
... would hamper our relation with someone.Honesty is always seems as a core foundation in...
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Line 1, column 475, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...foundation in making a relation strong. Additionally when anyone is asked about a single qua...
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Line 1, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...panion a quite obvious response would be Honesty.But why honesty ? why not someth...
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Line 1, column 634, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...uite obvious response would be Honesty.But why honesty ? why not something else su...
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Line 1, column 652, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
...nse would be Honesty.But why honesty ? why not something else such as hardworking,...
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Line 1, column 694, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , caring
...y not something else such as hardworking,caring etc. ? a simple and axiomatic answer wo...
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Line 1, column 709, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... else such as hardworking,caring etc. ? a simple and axiomatic answer would be be...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...n what we know is true and what we said.This conflict in some cases leads to a decre...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...fidence and depression in extreme cases.On contrary telling the truth promotes tra...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...anquility and boosts our self confidence .Telling the truth plays a vital role bec...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Telling
...quility and boosts our self confidence .Telling the truth plays a vital role because if...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'anyone'?
Suggestion: the; anyone
...the truth plays a vital role because if the anyone in relation came to know that he/she ha...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to know that he/she had been previously lied to ,it is unlikely that he/she woul...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...o know that he/she had been previously lied to ,it is unlikely that he/she would tr...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that he/she had been previously lied to ,it is unlikely that he/she would trust t...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...elated to the fact that he/she had been lied for .For example, if a child lies to hi...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o the fact that he/she had been lied for .For example, if a child lies to his moth...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...the fact that he/she had been lied for .For example, if a child lies to his mother ...
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Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...es in order to demand a suitable reward but However the mother came to know that her child ...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... the mother came to know that her child didnt scored that grade infact, he lied to h...
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Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...child didnt scored that grade infact, he lied to her,she is unlikely to trust her...
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , she
...cored that grade infact, he lied to her,she is unlikely to trust her child on any f...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...uld also lead to problems in a relation.For example let us consider a relation bet...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ad to problems in a relation.For example let us consider a relation between a doc...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...elation between a doctor and his patient .The patient has a incurable disease but ...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ation between a doctor and his patient .The patient has a incurable disease but the...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...doctor and his patient .The patient has a incurable disease but the doctor wont t...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...his remaining life in abject sadness Therefore concluding that though honesty plays a ...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in order to maintain a healthy relation .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, for example, such as, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92265027234 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549872122762 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.1344086022 273% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 273.694228314 48.9658058833 559% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.714285714 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8571428571 20.6045352989 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.45110844103 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624026303532 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021582692225 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223881237009 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402680421466 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102616982762 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 11.7677419355 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 58.1214874552 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.1575268817 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.01818996416 129% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.0537634409 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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