TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Telling the truth is subjective and entirely depend on receiving person and situation. Some situation may demand for truth and for other it is not wise to always tell the truth to the person. Through some particular reasons i would disagree with the given statement.

One should not assume that always revealing the truth and being honest would lead to betterment in any type of relationships. A person may not be able to handle the truth and can disturb the receiving person. For example, government agents who work as undercover for covert operation should not disclose his true identity or purpose in order to attain the predefined goal or mission. Telling the truth to person who's not affiliated to operation may lead to serious repercussions.

Secondly, other profession whose livelihood comes by only deceiving the people or confining the tactics of the game should not always indulge into telling the truth or reveal the strategies. Any kind of information or work should not be exposed or leaked as it may lead to dangerous events and can cause great lose financially or physically. Putting that at higher priority, truths often disguised as secrets are better stay behind the doors. For example, to magicians, who use many tricks and moves, it would be prudent to stick to their unrevealed secrets rather than exposing to people who crave for them. In that performer and spectators relationships, truth must not be come out otherwise it just absorb the aspects like entertainment and curiosity out of it.

Therefore, considering the statement it would not be always sensible to tell the truth in any situation or in any relationship as it may harm the relationship and can cause trouble to receiving person in any manner.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...person. Through some particular reasons i would disagree with the given statement...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...or mission. Telling the truth to person whos not affiliated to operation may lead to...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, kind of, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0276816609 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79140762232 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532871972318 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9973102997 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150194404574 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063343377941 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543375661876 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120094859984 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588834708602 0.0645574589148 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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