Human beings are by nature social animals; we live in society. Having a good relationship with others are very important for us to live in society. Some people agree that telling the truth is considered as the most important part in any relationship; others disagree. In my opinion, truth plays the main role in any relationship. Human dignity requires truth telling; truth brings trust, cooperation, and authentic communication.
To begin with, truth telling builds trust and cooperation among human beings. In order to build a strong relationship, people have to trust and cooperate with each other. For example, I remember five years ago I worked in a hospital, I had a new manager who is a very reliable and trustworthiness person. The manager always being honest, everyone in the department always informed by her of what is going on and what need to be improved regarding work performance and person's behaviors. When the manager said something, everybody trusted her and willing to give her cooperation. As a result, at the end of the year, our department won the reward for being the best teamwork. As you can see, my manager would not have gain trust and had a prosperous relationship with coworkers if she were not always telling the truth.
In addition, any good relationship requires good communication between others; truth-telling is an essential key to having authentic communication and makes the genuine interaction between people possible. If truth were not expected, it would not be long before communication would break down. For instance, one of my coworkers, she usually is not a reliable person and not always telling the truth. One day, my manager assigned her a project to work on, and she did not be honest and afraid to speak the manager the truth that she could not work on the project. She does not have skills to accomplish the job. Instead of telling the manager the truth, my coworker decided to not show up at work and did not communicate with anyone. As a result, the project passed the due date and people think my coworker is not reliable; she has not received any new project to work again after that day. This experience taught me that by not being honest and telling the truth can break down the communication and relationship between people.
In conclusion, though some may disagree with this statement, telling the truth is the most important part in any relationship. Not only truth brings trust and cooperation among people but also create good communication and make the genuine interaction between people happens. Everyone should always tell the truth and considers as the most important part of our relationship with others.
Essay evaluation report
my coworker decided to not show up at work
my coworker decided not to show up at work
Not only truth brings trust and cooperation among people but also create good communication
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
flaws:
No. of Words: 447 while No. of Different Words: 196 //need to put less examples.
follow this user by three reasons but less examples:
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Try this pattern:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree. (suppose we support side A)
Para 2: First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3: Second, reason 2, blabla... do the same thing as First
Para 4: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side B. first,....second...However, there is no causation/relation... Still I support side A, ...first,....second...
Para 5: Conclusion.
An simple example (Eating at home or restaurant) for paragraph 2:
Para 2: First, reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant; I don't need to pay tips...) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentence: for example, a sandwich can cost me $10 at restaurant, but it only cost me $5 at home.) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read; I can use the money for a trip...).
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 447 350
No. of Characters: 2171 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.598 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.857 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.753 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.435 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.606 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.18 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
Suggestion: being always
...and trustworthiness person. The manager always being honest, everyone in the department alwa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
... For instance, one of my coworkers, she usually is not a reliable person and not always te...
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233400402414 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.164989939638 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764587525151 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0623742454728 0.046263068375 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0523138832998 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108651911469 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0382293762575 0.0351676179071 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85773671977 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0241448692153 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00603621730382 0.00188951952338 319% => OK
Determiners: 0.10060362173 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0160965794769 0.0209618222197 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00804828973843 0.0139019557991 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2678.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 447.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99105145414 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351230425056 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261744966443 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174496644295 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125279642058 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85773671977 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460850111857 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0634055322 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4347826087 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8620749519 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.434782609 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.609279253 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.35971223022 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433488741136 0.300154397459 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148038764485 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0926124071705 0.0752933317313 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504565540793 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11616137202 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177653146193 0.114077575197 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969086997748 0.0781384742642 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.433953154874 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0880543051673 0.067059652881 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345550387236 0.210909579961 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540715116263 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.