tpo 11
Nowadays, internet plays a pivotal rolls in the life of any person. Surely, every thing has good and bed effects, and it is depend on each person to choose the way for using internet. I bilieve we can gain many valuable data and information from internet. Internet has many advantages, including many pdf book for reading, many websites about healghty and necessary news that people need to know.
First, let us look at what a person can typically gain from a internet. Reading a lot of book in the internet is the best reason for claiming that internet has many benefits. For example, when I write my these during my PhD program, I need one book that there is not in any library in our city, and I downloaded it from one website and used it. Furthermore, many people prefer to read books in the internet instead of original books. Because reading from internet is easy and sometimes free, each person can readily benefits from the advantages of the books.
There is also more subtle point we most consider. Using many instruction in websites about healthy, help anyone to become less illness, and it is very great for any society to have less disease. For instance, I do not conern about consuming to much salt in my foods, but after reading an article about the harming of salt I use a few salt in my meals. Also, each year people die because they do not have access to essential information about their body, and internet can omit this problem.
Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that internet gives us important news. If each country have to speak to their people about significant issue, media is the best mean to do it, and in fact, nowadays, internet is the one of the most effective media among people. Last year, one virus spread out around some cities in our country. Our goverment tried to solve this problem, but they need to people to contribute to their programs. During this condition, internets play an important roll, and they aware people about dangerious of this malady and the ways for afflicting by this virus by the help of many internet websites.
To sum up, I can say that without internet we certainly loss this advantages, and in the result of this we have lower culture, more dissease and also many peolpe who do not aware about the essential news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'roll'?
Suggestion: roll
Nowadays, internet plays a pivotal rolls in the life of any person. Surely, ever...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ing has good and bed effects, and it is depend on each person to choose the way for us...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t what a person can typically gain from a internet. Reading a lot of book in the ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of books'.
Suggestion: a lot of books
...typically gain from a internet. Reading a lot of book in the internet is the best reason for ...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...sometimes free, each person can readily benefits from the advantages of the books. Th...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...stance, I do not conern about consuming to much salt in my foods, but after readin...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun salt seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little salt'.
Suggestion: little salt
...ticle about the harming of salt I use a few salt in my meals. Also, each year people die...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237885462555 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.143171806167 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0814977973568 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418502202643 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0704845814978 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127753303965 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0220264317181 0.0351676179071 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39038106968 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330396475771 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00220264317181 0.00188951952338 117% => OK
Determiners: 0.0903083700441 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132158590308 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00660792951542 0.0139019557991 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2284.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 405.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63950617284 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296296296296 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214814814815 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165432098765 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0888888888889 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39038106968 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498765432099 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.7666228602 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3157894737 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.597052681 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.210526316 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 42.7972709552 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.51724137931 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0922807300619 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671770646257 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502558727788 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176126732825 0.151897553556 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355589856398 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0821650003645 0.067059652881 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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