TPO-12 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Having enough knowledge in academic subjects is a big concern for many people especially for academic people, who cares about education. There are too many advantages and disadvantages for being knowledgeable in many subjects, but many experts prefer to have enough information about variety of subjects instead of focusing on one single subject. They know that it is hard to do, but they still prefer to go that way. In my view, having knowledge in several majors is better than being expert in one topic.
First and foremost, many science are related together. For example, a doctor should know about psychology and other topics and subjects to help his/her patient, because in many cases, people have some psychological problems instead of physical problems. An expert doctor should know enough about other things to recognize the problem and find a perfect solution.
Second of all, being expert in many subjects will help people to have more opportunities to find a suitable job. A person, who knows many things in different subjects is qualified for many job positions. For instance, my brother has a PHD in Organic Chemistry. He also has 170 essays in his major. He came to United States two years ago and he started to find a job, but many universities asked him to teach something else, but he told them that my major is this and I just want to be focus on it, so they rejected him. Consequently, after two years he could not find any job, because he is looking for something specific and it is hard to find.
Last but not least, it is fun to study many topics. Many professors prefer to know many topics instead of one topic, because they can take some different courses during a semester and they do not need to repeat a same subject for hundreds of times during a year. Additionally, they can find their favorite topic after a while. Many students or professors hate a subject, because they have no idea about the subject. After a while, they will have enough interest to continue that major.
To sum up, although studying a variety of topics is hard, it has many advantages in the moment and in the future.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun science seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sciences'.
Suggestion: many sciences
...pert in one topic. First and foremost, many science are related together. For example, a do...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... topics is hard, it has many advantages in the moment and in the future.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in many cases, in my view, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72506738544 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5515628342 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.421993335 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2631578947 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1827839792 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641407205474 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596226629237 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103495137516 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070964633127 0.0645574589148 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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