Today people prefer different type of methods to comunicate with each other and the economy causes many previously common meeting to be obsolete. Many beleive the extended family such as grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles are less important today. In my view this is not correct for two main reasons.
First, the economy today is in depression so that many families need to work more than before. Depression is the main cause of higher attitude to the important things that a family need rather than meeting with the other relatives. For example, when I was a child, in different occasions the family gathered in the house of my grand father. The main reason for that was high level of money that a person had in his or pocket. people didn't need further working to gather more money in order to live on it. Today, our country is in depression and people need to spend all of their income on the prrequisits of the social life. Nowaday, not nly the father of a family need to work but the mother in many families work to gather money for tuition costs of their childeren, renting an appartment, and making a living by. So that most of times people in family spend their time on their prerequisits on their life.
Third, There are many social groups in the internet that families prefer to contact with each other there. Previously the main devise for two persn to make a contact was phone call, now internet prevails the all the comunication domains. For instance, my mother and all of my realtives have special group in the telegram, which is a prevalent social group in my country. Therefore, it facilitated the connection in our family and they think do not need to see each other unless its important. In addition, social groups can prepare many type of chatting servises that are almost free according to the prce of internet in our contry. Since the cost of telephne call caused many family to speak less, the were more inclined to meet each other. So that, social groups not only facilitate the comunication but also are the cheapest way for people to speak and met each other.
In conclusion, many people beleive extended families are less important today but lack of meeting and comunicating between them depends on several other resons. People spend alot of time on social groups and the economy situation is the main factor that people in families less comunicate with each other in comparioson to the previous years. Even though many people today have less interaction with each other, according to the virtual environment such as social networks the contact between two or more person is significantly more than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g with the other relatives. For example, when I was a child, in different occasio...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ney that a person had in his or pocket. people didnt need further working to gather mo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t a person had in his or pocket. people didnt need further working to gather more mon...
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Line 3, column 818, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... an appartment, and making a living by. So that most of times people in family spend th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y spend their time on their prerequisits on their life. Third, There are many ...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
... In addition, social groups can prepare many type of chatting servises that are almost fr...
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Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
... Since the cost of telephne call caused many family to speak less, the were more inclined t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251509054326 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.132796780684 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122736418511 0.0866891130778 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046277665996 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0402414486922 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136820925553 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0181086519115 0.0351676179071 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47382321216 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362173038229 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0985915492958 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00201207243461 0.0209618222197 10% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.010060362173 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2645.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 456.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80043859649 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353070175439 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214912280702 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146929824561 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0899122807018 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47382321216 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445175438596 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.3163799511 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7142857143 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4881865143 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.952380952 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 43.2055137845 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.85321100917 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351555473823 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123835787044 0.103427244359 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0662583826629 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524724223297 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0992175787258 0.151897553556 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15442688619 0.114077575197 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672360779228 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.455204653578 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0829280092294 0.067059652881 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271739761349 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157185479749 0.0618886996521 25% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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