The question is that do people benefit more from traveling to foreign countries or not? Some people think that traveling in their own countries has more benefits while others think that traveling to foreign countries is more beneficial. In my point of view, traveling to other countries is much more advantageous and people can benefit more. There are lots of reasons for my opinion but the most important of them are: people can learn lots of things from other countries and they can find lots of new friends.
When people travel to other countries they have the opportunity to learn lots of new things. When they arrive at an unfamiliar country they see plenty of new things such as new cultural and language. Travelers can learn about that country's cultural and even they can improve their own cultural. For example, when I traveled to Thailand I saw that people were respecting each other very well. They never shout at each other and they never even fight in streets. Actually, I was impressed with this kind of cultural and when I came back to my country I tried to respect other people. This experience has improved my entire life since I've come back from Thailand.
People can also find lots of new friends from other countries. It's alleged that people are willing to be friends with foreigners more than other native people because foreigners are very interesting to native people. It means that when you go to another country you can find friends there easily. This friendship has lots of benefits. They can help you whenever you travel to their country and also you can invite them to your own country. You can inform them about your country. You can show them how historical and beautiful your country is. As a personal experience, when I went to Thailand I found lots of friends that they help me a lot whenever I go there. They also sometimes come to my country and they enjoy my country's historical places.
As a conclusion, traveling to foreign countries has more benefits than traveling inside the borders. When you travel to other countries you can learn lots of things and you can find lots of friends .Don't you think it is worth traveling abroad?
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.189655172414 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.169950738916 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110837438424 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0615763546798 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.12315270936 0.0685040099705 180% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108374384236 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0295566502463 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40995852968 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0418719211823 0.0309702414327 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0394088669951 0.0887237588012 44% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0320197044335 0.0209618222197 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0221674876847 0.0139019557991 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2182.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77248677249 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306878306878 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240740740741 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161375661376 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10582010582 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40995852968 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410052910053 0.524397521467 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.4094082024 59.2087087015 72% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1818181818 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9594130623 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 41.2558922559 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 0.923611111111 1.45489161554 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32044218534 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.169887858806 0.103427244359 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.155730483016 0.0752933317313 207% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468579202796 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146793283406 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127504443669 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944743377092 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373309752622 0.336927656856 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0393804776869 0.067059652881 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240395927173 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633518056637 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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