There are certain considerations or factors that everyone should take into account to investigate and examine advertisements. I certainly agree that most advertisements assist products to look better. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
Firstly, they use modern technology to make products sound better. These days, human experience a huge advancement and improvement in different fields of science and engineering. These technical and practical improvements come to contribute advertiser to produce and offer a fascinating and an intriguing advertisement. They utilize several visual and audio effects to make products sound better in which attract more attention. For instance, candies and other junk foods should appear in different colors and with an elegant music to whet children’s appetites to pay money for them.
Furthermore, emphasizing on advantages of a product is another noticeable reason. Another way that advertisements try to persuade people for shopping is to show the positive profits of a good or merchandise and hide its negative points. This is especially common for medical products. For instance, advertisements talk about the efficiency of diet drugs as a great solution for overweight or maybe for hair growing. But there is no any description and alert about negative consequences of such medical treatments including chronic daily headache, depression, stress, or even hypertension.
Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that advertisements attempt to show the products as they really are to gain customers' trust. All companies and factories compete with each other to acquire more trust, and therefore make more profits. So any exaggeration and betray can harm this trust and destroy a well known business. However, still I affirm that advertisements attend to show products look much better. These overstatements cannot harm a company because most of the adults and children are aware about mentioned advertisers’ techniques. Besides, there are other ways to compensate and increase customers' trust like discounting, free product, or even providing a better service.
Due to aforementioned ground, all folks should bear in mind that advertisements try to show products better. Participation of technology and emphasizing on advantages are two prime and conspicuous supports.
Essay evaluation report
to make products sound better in which attract more attention
Description: can you re-write this sentence? why 'in which'?
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 360 350
No. of Characters: 1985 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.356 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.514 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.162 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.757 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.487 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun visual seems to be countable; consider using: 'several visuals'.
Suggestion: several visuals
... intriguing advertisement. They utilize several visual and audio effects to make products soun...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...apos;s appetites to pay money for them. Furthermore, emphasizing on advantages o...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...or maybe for hair growing. But there is no any description and alert about negativ...
^^
Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pression, stress, or even hypertension. Admittedly, there are some justification...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246913580247 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.158024691358 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113580246914 0.0866891130778 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0172839506173 0.0685040099705 25% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.0987654320988 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0148148148148 0.0351676179071 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.3183819778 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041975308642 0.0309702414327 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765432098765 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148148148148 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00493827160494 0.0139019557991 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2412.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 360.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.7 5.86048508987 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416666666667 0.338922669872 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.355555555556 0.251872472559 141% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.261111111111 0.174417080927 150% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.197222222222 0.112833075102 175% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3183819778 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.524397521467 116% => OK
Word variations: 72.6094683091 59.2087087015 123% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3636363636 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6144259736 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 51.9191919192 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.6404494382 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273181026343 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0599210841412 0.103427244359 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0524913292539 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469786546284 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104705044739 0.151897553556 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952909149929 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545996715661 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219047317635 0.336927656856 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0512938086602 0.067059652881 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171307349097 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507048983898 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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