There are certain considerations or factors that every one should take into account about the pathways that successful people follow to fulfill their dreams. I strongly believe that success is a consequence of trying new things and taking risks, rather than only sticking to what they know. One can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side, and each one have their strength and weaknesses. The explanation of every reason will be explored in the following essay.
To begin with, from a professional perspective, trying new things creates new opportunities and brightens new roads to success. If an employee gets stuck with a certain task, he spends most of his career doing the same thing. Devastating routine invade his business life, by which boring would be a certain feeling. Whereas, new tasks and having the enough encouragement to take risks saves the worker from living in a miserable job. For example, a salesman who is selectively concerned with doing high numbers of sales to increase his commission will be only doing that for the rest of his life. On the other hand, another salesman who have ambition to take risks and examine new tasks, will have a greater probability to be promoted to a manager later on.
Furthermore, trying new things and taking risks is more financially rewarding, which is the most important in a job. Every one wants an enormous check after working hard all days. A worker who works ten hours straight does not want to get paid nine dollars per hour. However, if he gets more open to new tasks and take risk in what he does, then his pay raises. This guarantees him a powerful situation and much stability.
Admittedly, there is some justification by one who argues that sticking with the same task which they know how to do well leads them to master it and be highly experienced. The repetition in the job enables the process to be stamped to their virgin brains endlessly. However, still I affirm that trying new things and taking risks is the preferred way to success. This results in a greater social stability as well, and to a person to become amused in all aspects of his life.
Due to aforementioned background, enlightening new paths to the person is the guaranteed way to reach the peak. Trying new things and taking risks are the popular ways to succeed. This have marvelous effects on someone's career,as well as on their financial and social perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, well, whereas, for example, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84819277108 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67787069061 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546987951807 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7642725128 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291480177747 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822868343267 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077082755281 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157841199437 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472720083955 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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