TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an

Nowadays, the advancement of technology and tendency of people for having fast-paced life increase more than last decades. Some people believes that working quickly without being precise is acceptable in this modern era. However, I completely disagree with this opinion because working should do based on accuracy and company will hire the precise employer.
First and the foremost, the employer should work precisely which is a requirement of being successful in their career. To give an example, the employer of the post company have the burden to send parcels and letters to given address. Their job requires ordination and accurate in order to organize multiple tasks if some of the employers were careless in doing the given work. Therefore, the company will lose their reputation among their customer.
second, companies interest on hire the employer who prioritize their jobs based on the required risk. Accuracy is one of the factors that each employee will take into account for choosing their employer. In addition, competition between people for getting higher position rise up in the recent decade.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... in order to organize multiple tasks if some of the employers were careless in doing the gi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...their reputation among their customer. second, companies interest on hire the employe...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 407.700716846 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32386363636 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5595629207 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653409090909 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8617723278 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106996854004 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425623145015 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383495281555 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717755107438 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478300457212 0.0645574589148 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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