Today, young people do spend enough time to help their communities. They study very hard, also work for long hours, and also they breed successful children. Thus, young people are very helpful for their societies.
Youth have to study hard. Most young people are trying to serve their society by studying and being educated. A young student who studies in medical sience for many years in order to treat sick people and serve his community.
They help their communities by working for long hours. Many young people work hard in order to provide a new service or merchandise. A young manager who works in a company, wants to build something new which improves people's lives, or a young teacher who teaches teenage children helps his society .
Young, educated people breed successful children. one of the most important possessions for each family is their children. The success of a society depends on its members. Young, active parents always encourage their children to study hard to be come as succesful as they are, if not more.
young people help their communities from different angles. Most of them study very hard in order to be educated and serve their society, they nowadays work for long hours and try to provide services which improves the people lives, most of these young, educated people breed successful children, thereby helping their communities.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236220472441 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.181102362205 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125984251969 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0590551181102 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0708661417323 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0826771653543 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0314960629921 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39584404734 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393700787402 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0433070866142 0.0887237588012 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0196850393701 0.0139019557991 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1371.0 2387.08602151 57% => OK
No of words: 227.0 408.028673835 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03964757709 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348017621145 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246696035242 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149779735683 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0925110132159 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39584404734 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519823788546 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 47.6428820592 59.2087087015 80% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1333333333 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.738839032 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.266666666667 0.644075263715 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.8029368576 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.12658227848 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256909865395 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0790221590979 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0675980028695 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530496830217 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172112831208 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109761032409 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756012695325 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288354587731 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0736741658939 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172511897167 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309769439689 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.