TPO-29 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are many factors responsible the quality of education like the appropriate environment at the campus, good facilities, devoted professors and diligent students. All these things all together make an institution a better place to study. Giving priority to just one factor will be quite in equal and subjective. Although, many people think that just by going to a big famous university will be more than enough to get good education but I don’t agree with this idea. In my opinion it is extremely important to spend money on the salaries of the professors.

To begin with, professors are the essential part of the team that builds the future of a student. Today most of the students prefer to go to colleges that have huge buildings with fancy library and coffee house. No one actually pay attention to the most significant part of it and that is the teaching staff. A good dedicated professor has power to nurture a student. He/she not only solve the academic problems of a student but in addition to it he/she even motivate student to grow. I can recall that when I was in college I was not able comprehend chemistry subject. As a result, I failed in my midterm exam. I decided to quit but then my chemistry professor helped me a lot. He started teaching me even after the class without accepting any tuition fee from me. Eventually I scored good marks in my final exam. That is why, it is necessary to have good sincere teachers.

On the other hand, when a teacher is not satisfied with the salary then he will lose interest in teaching. Today, we all know that money is extremely important to survive and teachers are not an exception to it. Though, it is a noble profession but still everyone needs money to run a family. Most of the colleges and schools are paying fewer amounts to their staffs that are not sufficient to fulfil their requirements due to which many teachers take tuition at home. This practice has increased tremendously in past few years and has resulted as an extra expense for poor students who can’t afford it for example my son’s friend is very diligent but still he failed in his first year. He is studying in a government college where teachers are not at all bothered about the future of students as they do not get handsome salary.

To recapitulate, I would suggests that all the universities and schools should focus more on teachers and should give them decent salary rather than spending money on other needless things. This will definitely encourage professors to work hard and put in more efforts to teach students. After all, a teacher is like a god for a student that helps him/her to be successful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'motivates'.
Suggestion: motivates
...udent but in addition to it he/she even motivate student to grow. I can recall that when...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'suggest'
Suggestion: suggest
...me salary. To recapitulate, I would suggests that all the universities and schools s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'after all', 'for example', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208171206226 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.165369649805 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101167315175 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056420233463 0.046263068375 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0661478599222 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103112840467 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0252918287938 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64831994273 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466926070039 0.0309702414327 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933852140078 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175097276265 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194552529183 0.0139019557991 140% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2670.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 466.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72961373391 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328326180258 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255364806867 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182403433476 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109442060086 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64831994273 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534334763948 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.2570023658 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.64 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.748005421 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.64 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.1764806867 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.16891891892 1.45489161554 80% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293836875104 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0833182881382 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0707917519174 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.412548538805 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122917183409 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101017171757 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776312438665 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377035970224 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0616325857111 0.067059652881 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21950184673 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517625103631 0.0618886996521 84% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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