Educating children becomes more easier today. Technological advancments help them to learn easily. Children learn many team working through online games, and also social networking Web site make them to behave sociable.
Technological progresses have eased educating. In the past, there was no computer or television and children could learn only at schools. However today technology is advancing fast and children can read more materials over their textbooks through the internet, and also they can get prepared for their exams through watching the educational programs on television.
Online games teach children team working. Today, online games competitions are held in the world and many players work with each other as a team. Each members has a specific duty during the match. If they do their duties well, they can win the game.
Social networks make children to behave more sociable. Children can be in thouch with the other people through the social networks, like facebook. They can add people and talk with them. It is very useful for shy ones, because they have this chance to make a lot of friends and behave more sociable.
I strongly believe that, educating children have become easier, because technological advancements allow them to learn things much faster than before. Online games give the opportunity to children to play and work together as a team, and also social networks enable them to behave more sociable in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
Educating children becomes more easier today. Technological advancments help t...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: Website
...nline games, and also social networking Web site make them to behave sociable. Technolo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...players work with each other as a team. Each members has a specific duty during the ...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...with each other as a team. Each members has a specific duty during the match. If th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.180769230769 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0923076923077 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0730769230769 0.046263068375 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0576923076923 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0461538461538 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54234357397 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0307692307692 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0692307692308 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230769230769 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1451.0 2387.08602151 61% => OK
No of words: 234.0 408.028673835 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20085470085 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388888888889 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200854700855 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106837606838 0.112833075102 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54234357397 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 59.043102495 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 14.625 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0167866534 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 120.699889404 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.644075263715 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 41.5480769231 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.20987654321 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322097750706 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0973449511794 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0856008541935 0.0752933317313 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510192713034 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159734979064 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114874282974 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516471786023 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.221379316865 0.336927656856 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0649076544238 0.067059652881 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194826481262 0.210909579961 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197285581646 0.0618886996521 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.