Although, some people may believe that, teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past, I disagree with that, because today being educated has become very important for people. Also, teachers have a significant role in preparing children for the future life. Besides, advancements in technology have made the need of teachers more crucial.
In recent years, technology has progressed rapidly, which in turn has lots of changes in people's lives. Today, people more their jobs through the internet. Having cellphone and computer has become regular for them and living without them in nearly impossible. So, if they want to use these technology, they need to know how to work with them. Also, most companies have expanded their business through the internet and made a competetion atmosphere with other companies, and it would be a great job opportunity for someone, who has academic educations. Thus, I believe that, being educated has become more important for people and as a result, teachers have high position in society.
In addition, In the past, it was the family's task to prepare children for their responsibilities in the future. Whereas today, as the technology advances and the living conditions become more complicated, the need for working have become obvious. In some families, both parents have to work to make money for foods and clothes. Therefore, they don't have enough time to spend with their kids in order to make them ready for their future life. I believe that, one of the most significant tasks of school is that prepare children in the future. During a class, teachers try to learn them discipline and taking responsibility. Thus, from my perspective, teachers now are more appreciated and valued by people.
As I discussed, with advancing in technology, the world is changing rapidly and using the time efficiently has become more important. For example, many companies use the internet in order to advertise their products and attract more costumers. Now imagine that, one of these companies is going to encounter with harware or software issues. It needs to fix the problems right away, if it wants to remain in the competetion with other companies. Thus, the need for teachers has become more imoportant, because they are training the future technicians.
In conclusion, I believe that, as the time passes and technology advances, teachers have become more important for the society, because unlike the past, it is very important for people to be literate. Moreover, since today parents have not enough time to spend with their children and prepare them for their responsibilities in the future, it is teachers tasks to make them ready. Furthermore, as the technology devices become widespread through out the world, the need of teachers for training qualified technicians become more crucial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...rly impossible. So, if they want to use these technology, they need to know how to work with the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... high position in society. In addition, In the past, it was the familys task to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...future. Whereas today, as the technology advances and the living conditions becom...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... for foods and clothes. Therefore, they dont have enough time to spend with their ki...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ussed, with advancing in technology, the world is changing rapidly and using the ...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...he technology devices become widespread through out the world, the need of teachers for tra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2385.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1847826087 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77048565007 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439130434783 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3816082336 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135561814161 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498521738349 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424472950145 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102764254041 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391774158915 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.