The competitiveness in jobs makes it difficult for parents to take out enough time for their children. So, when parents have some time, I believe that they should spend it in helping kids with school work. This will help them ace in school work and also solve their problems regarding school work.
First of all, kids will secure good grades. In my country each lecture lasts for about 45 minutes and after the lecture teacher gives us plenty of home work. It is sometimes difficult to understand the home work. Additionally, there are so many students in our class that teacher cannot pay attention to each and every one. So, when parents are having free time, they should help their pupil in understanding the work. This will improve their understanding of the subject and eventually will get good grades in the exam.
Furthermore, some of the kids are too shy to ask for help from teachers. When some children have problems, they never stand and ask questions in the class. They either take help from friends or their parents. If parents spend some time every day or on weekends then this kids can ask their difficulties and can solve their problems. For instance, my friend in my class is so shy to ask her difficulties in the class that her parents need to pay special attention to her class work.
Finally, Studying with parents can be fun too. There are several games available in the market which are designed in such a way that it helps students to understand the important concept of their subject by playing them. It is best way for parents as well as children to get involved in such activity. For example, my niece and my sister spend lot of time on dream box on i-pad which is very interactive and fun learning opportunity for preschoolers. She loves it.
In conclusion, although, games are essential for overall growth of the children, they can be played with our friends but for schoolwork parents time is essential to improve score , to understand the concept. It will help a lot in future classes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...ss that teacher cannot pay attention to each and every one. So, when parents are having free time,...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ood grades in the exam. Furthermore, some of the kids are too shy to ask for help from t...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...pt of their subject by playing them. It is best way for parents as well as children to ...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rents time is essential to improve score , to understand the concept. It will help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72598870056 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52468236172 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485875706215 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4836059658 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52380952381 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219195210497 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702071450258 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754369515464 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136868818455 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460470178032 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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