What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age.
The 20th and 21th centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes, which have been made in human's lives. Perhaps the most important milestone of these two centuries are the changes in our hometown like high internet speed, public transportation, recover from economic recession and so forth. Indeed, these changes will make the world a better place to live. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, it is established beyond doubt that internet access provide an opportunity for people to progress day in day out. In fact, majorities of societies face a serious problem with low speed of internet due to the fact it facilitate many works to do. Generally phrased, banking transaction, book a ticket, buy different things online and so on, are among popular works between people, which with low internet speed people will run into a huge problem and confront trials and tribulations. To elucidate more on this issue, improving internet speed not only can patronize people to carry out their daily work easily but also can encourage many people gain various information through internet and enhance their knowledge. In addition, a great chance will provide for people to develop their social skills by getting online whenever they like and want. As a tangible example, a plethora of country that abound with high internet speed are improving drastically owing to the fact that crowds of works are done just in the spur of moment.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that improving public transportation could be considerable for people at my age. To put it in other word, myriads of metropolitan cities suffer from air pollution, traffic jams, and toxic materials release to the air and so forth, which could put people's health into danger. Indeed, health problem is one of utmost important issue among people especially people at my age and developing public transportation could contribute greatly to the reduction of pollution. Going into the depth, if my hometown allocate a substantial amount of budget to enhancement of public transportation, vast majorities of people at my age will entice to visit my hometown and use it instead of their own car.
Thirdly, offering free university education will be so enjoyable for people at my age. As a matter of fact, government should provide fertile ground for people to educate freely without paying a great amount of money. It is incumbent upon government to support people especially student to continue their study and reach tertiary education. In such case, majorities of people will galvanize to attend university in my hometown and use their knowledge in a way that society make a great progress in different realm.
In light of reason elaborated, I reiterate that there are many works to change in my hometown in order to attract various people at my age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, thirdly, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11715481172 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76823701109 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.923704369 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.736842105 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1578947368 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16119572852 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552843842879 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427762632866 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104953940721 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340227437525 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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