When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree?
Since the dawn of civilization, success is one of the momentous life goals for every human being all around the world. Indeed, every human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether luck play a key role in success or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that luck has nothing to do with success. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that if luck is to be considered, no one would be work but just wait till their luck shines up. Scientifically speaking, success is one of the greatest wants of human which people bend over backwards to achieve. If luck taken into consideration, people should lie down and let works to be done by chance. In this way, hardworking would be meaningless and no one in the world make an efforts in order to reach their dreams. For example, Thomas Edison one of the greatest inventors experienced defeat several times and finally became successful through his hard work. Indeed, if he wanted to wait for chance and luck, never became successful in his life. Delving further into the issue reveal that being successful through hard work is a well-known adage. Not until people become persistent in their work can they experience success. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that vast majorities of people who take chances and luck into account become less successful in their everyday life because they were on the belief that hard work has nothing to do and is just waste of time.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that success completely depend on its definition. Broadly speaking, many people have money, luck, fortune and so forth but they are not happy and satisfied at all. On the contrary, majority of people face trials and tribulations and keep trying to overcome those difficulties through hard work. Indeed, this attitude is a kind of success for them. To put it in other word, success totally depend on people themselves. If people try hard, they can be successful otherwise they should wait till chances come up. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, luck can effects in people's life indirectly. For instance, myriads of people make an efforts and work hard but they do not receive proper outcomes. Actually, it goes without saying that in such situation luck and chance can provide an opportunity for people to be successful. Somehow, people need to be lucky because luck facilitates success. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there is a correlation between luck and hardworking but keep trying and work hard outweigh luck and chance. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that luck has nothing to do when it comes to hard working. In fact, people can reach their dreams by being persistent. In addition, success depend on people themselves. If they believe that they can be successful, then, this attitude makes luck pale.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an effort' or simply 'efforts'?
Suggestion: an effort; efforts
...eaningless and no one in the world make an efforts in order to reach their dreams. For exa...
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Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'effect'
Suggestion: effect
...benefits it has, indisputably, luck can effects in peoples life indirectly. For instanc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220257234727 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.180064308682 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08038585209 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0627009646302 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048231511254 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118971061093 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0418006430868 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76770517391 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0305466237942 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.008038585209 0.00188951952338 425% => OK
Determiners: 0.072347266881 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0209003215434 0.0209618222197 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112540192926 0.0139019557991 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3328.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 558.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96415770609 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349462365591 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258064516129 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163082437276 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118279569892 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76770517391 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.0551608561 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0888658824 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.35483871 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.548387096774 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.8064516129 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.30939226519 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342243885686 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0713306791937 0.103427244359 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0601060160328 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.386217246676 0.497263757937 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105888941317 0.151897553556 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109324259371 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691411612001 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.48442509567 0.336927656856 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0502289818446 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26144769081 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274962497876 0.0618886996521 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8870967742 219% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 22.0 8.42114695341 261% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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