Which one of the following is the best approach to reduce living expense?
A. share the rent with roommate
B. do not buy the latest technology products like cellphone frequently
C. cook food at home.
Our fast-paced, high-pressure lives require us to minimize our expenses to save money for our future in the modern era. Some people find roommates cut down their rent, or others use their gadgets for a few years instead of periodically upgrading them to a newer model. But the most effective way of saving is that people try to cook their own meals at home. I feel this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
To begin with, buying the ingredients that are required to prepare beneficial food needs relatively less money compared to ordering in a restaurant. It is because a restaurant or a cafe has to pay tax, rent of the store, and energy bills. Consequently, when we buy food from these businesses, we will pay significantly more than when we cook homemade chicken soup, for instance. To exemplify, a bowl of soup at a regular restaurant is much more expensive than the bills for purchasing some tomatoes and onions.
Secondly, convenient foods, namely fast foods, contain processed ingredients. These materials have severe negative impacts may cause sicknesses such as cancer and cardiovascular problems. Therefore, an individual that is using these harmful foods frequently, has to visit healthcare providers consistently. Hence, they have to allocate a considerable amount of money to pay for health care services in addition to the money that they spend on buying fast foods. Last year I was extremely busy with my Ph.D. thesis, which was not able to cook food. The only place I could stop by to buy something to eat was the local fast food near the campus. Subsequently, after a few months, I felt unbearable pain in my stomach, and when I visited my doctor, he told me that I had a serious liver problem and should stay in the hospital for a week. It ended up in using a significant amount of my savings for this problem.
In conclusion, to my mind, people can bring about good savings for themselves when they start preparing their meals. They can spend considerably less money by buying ingredients and cooking in their kitchens and by inclining their health condition, and minimizing the money they have to pay on healthcare services by avoiding processed foods that are immensely harmful.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8654353562 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8108475518 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585751978892 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9879613526 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131095130975 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411304468357 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343189208188 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801738480917 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275148935931 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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