your city has decided to build a statue to honor a famous person in your country, who would you choose?
If my city decided to build a statue of someone famous in our country, I would have to choose Abdul-Sattar Edhi for his great sacrifices and work he has done to improve the lives of many unfortunate people. I will discuss a few of his many honorable deeds below.
Edhi decided to create welfare trusts and ambulance networks across the country ever since his mother succumbed to paralysis and mentally illness. Seeing his mother’s struggle reminded him of many others who would have the same fate due to the ill-treatment they received in their country. Edhi did not only help such people, instead he also helped injured people, misplaced people, orphans, widows as well.
The quality I admire most in him is that he actively took part in helping those in need. He would spend time with children living in orphanages, providing them with food and clothes. He was seen as a grandfather by the residents of Edhi center. He drove an ambulance around the city regularly and if he ever found a person in need on the way, they would be escorted to the relief center
Although he was probably the most well-known philanthropist in his country, he lived humbly. He did not wish to appear in the media or be lauded by the public. He never took a penny out of the funds that he received from the public, instead depended on government securities that he bought earlier in his life to survive. All the funds were used for the purpose of humanitarian aid.
In short, the reason why I believe we should build a statue to honor Edhi is because of his work for humanity. Even after his death, he left behind a legacy that is being carried forward by his children and volunteers, who work around the clock to aid all those in need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...father by the residents of Edhi center. He drove an ambulance around the city regu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd the clock to aid all those in need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51082157785 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5011233736 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126591089123 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434405548717 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557362665727 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814792710484 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642315741836 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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