Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does
That in today’s world, people’s lives are affected by assorted factors is an axiom. Both internal factors like family relationships and external ones like job environment influence people’s feelings. A question, which is a matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether job affects our happiness more than social life. Although, it is a little hard to reach a consensus on this issue, I am, to a great extent on the belief that people’s job have a more profound effect on their happiness. The following reasons would elaborate on the thesis.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons that justifies the thesis is that people expend at least eight hours a day, which is one third of their life, at the work place. To put it in general words, only when people are intrigued by their job originating from their intense like, can they be happy and joyful. Simply stated, meeting and interacting with so many other employees at the word place, people are affected by their positive or adverse feedbacks. Going into the depth, the more people like their job, the more feelings of delight engender. Needless to say that an appropriate job can be deemed a decisive approach through which people experience a healthy lifestyle with abundant pleasure. It is all transparent that having worked for several hours in a joyful environment, people will still have enough energy to interact with family members which bring about more happiness and a sturdy family foundation. To shed more light on the issue, according to the result of the study posted in Time Magazine, employees who do not like their job and work only for scant income usually suffer from depression to some degree.
Alongside with the first reason elaborated above, the importance of the amount of income due to working is another point which requires meticulous attention. To clarify, unless the extravagant cost of subsistence cannot be fulfilled, no feeling of happiness can be experienced. Broadly speaking, since the cost of sustenance is increasing at an unprecedented rate, if the initial needs of people cannot be obviated by their income, they will not be happy at all. To delineate, tired of working in several shifts without plentiful salary, people will be under the pressure of financial burden and lots of stress. To elucidate on, to recreate and disport for having some excitement, a great deal of money should be spent in recreational facilities which are only affordable for people with high salary. However, what I mentioned above might not be overgeneralized to all contexts. Some people who receive huge amount of money each year never feel happy in their life because of so many problems in their social life. Nevertheless, they are more of an exception rather than a general rule.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from the general rule, I do agree that the job of people have a more intense effect on their feelings and happiness. To recapitulate the reasons, not only do people spend the majority of their time at job with other people, but also the amount of income also play a significant role in people’s sentimentalities
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'at least', 'broadly speaking', 'in general', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248764415157 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.136738056013 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988467874794 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0378912685338 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0362438220758 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141680395387 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0378912685338 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8183207552 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263591433278 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971993410214 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181219110379 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197693574959 0.0139019557991 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3188.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 529.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02646502836 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374291115312 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258979206049 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181474480151 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132325141777 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8183207552 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514177693762 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 62.2020334654 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0454545455 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2047187315 48.84282405 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.909090909 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0454545455 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.9433751504 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.03125 1.45489161554 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921669454314 0.300154397459 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116538138407 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069462927409 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478384914816 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140612100522 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043042082826 0.114077575197 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491778397116 0.0781384742642 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437900292751 0.336927656856 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0336772542547 0.067059652881 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843024885711 0.210909579961 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498628864859 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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