4.Chevalier’s events in memoir
Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the
specific points made in the reading passage.
The article states that some critics claim that the Chevalier distored many events in memoir to make his life seem more exciting and provide three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that memoirs are reliable historical sources and supports each of the author’s reasons.
In the first place, the reading claims that in his memoir the Chevalier while live in Switzerland, he was very wealthy, and he spend a great deal of money there on parties and gambling. Moreover, the lecture discusses valuable to these situation is poor. He explains that he spend money on gambling and parties too, also he saves his own to give money. Cash borrow to arrive to where he want.
Second, The article avers that skeptical are about the accuracy of the conversations that the Chevalier records in the memoir between himself and the famous writer Voltaire. In addition, the professor makes this point by stating that he wrote memoir to remember about conversations that were about many years and he lived in the time and confirm them.
Finally, the reading states that the memoir’s account of the Chevalier’s escape from a notorious prison in Venice, Italy. Furthermore,the lectur discusses this point by saying that another prisoner are powerful and non of them are lovely in his case. Government ducuments shows that he repairs ciling and about ascape as he said he did.
the reading claims that in his memoir the Chevalier while live in Switzerland, he was very wealthy
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
and he spend a great deal of money
and he spends a great deal of money
the lecture discusses valuable to these situation is poor.
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
he spend money
he spends money
Cash borrow to arrive to where he want.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
another prisoner are powerful
another prisoner is powerful
Sentence: The article states that some critics claim that the Chevalier distored many events in memoir to make his life seem more exciting and provide three reasons of support.
Error: distored Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Furthermore,the lectur discusses this point by saying that another prisoner are powerful and non of them are lovely in his case.
Error: lectur Suggestion: lecture
Sentence: Government ducuments shows that he repairs ciling and about ascape as he said he did.
Error: ciling Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: ducuments Suggestion: documents
Error: ascape Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
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Score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 230 250
No. of Characters: 1118 1200
No. of Different Words: 132 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.861 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.399 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.005 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.624 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4