I don´t agree that progress is always good. It mainly depends in what direction the progress is going. For example, in Nazi Germany impressive progresses were made towards a xenophobic society where populism, intolerance and lack of respect to the human kind reigned. Even though, other progresses were made a side, that were positive, like economic development, scientific devolpment and the first campain agains smoking (tobacco). The same could be said of the Soviet union, in which a large amount of atrocities were made in order to compete with the USA and to prove that comunism was the "real deal". Nevertheless, I belive that one society or individual has to progress in order to evolve and be better in the future, without progress we eould still be cave man, but attention has to be payed to where that progress is leading to and its consequences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 1373.03311258 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 270.72406181 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00689655172 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.04702891845 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81007191398 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.540411800872 120% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 419.366225166 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9798484705 49.2860985944 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121554936808 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838221493555 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101171679065 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121554936808 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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