Population density
One of the ways countries evaluate their growth rate is comparing the change of its popular density in a period of time. The popular density is the relation between the area of said country and its population. The next paragraphs will establish comparisons of those characteristics between three different territories during a time lapse of 11 years: the European Community, the United States and the Soviet Union.
The popular density of the European Union during the time lapse between 1989 and 2000 ranged between 142 and 148, being the largest when compared to the number of inhabitants per square kilometer of the United States and The Soviet Union, which ranged between 25-28 and 12-14, respectively.
Between 1989 and 2000, the European Community experimented a growth on its population of over 13 million people, the growth of the United States during that same period of time was a little less than 30 million people, and the Soviet Union augmented the number of its inhabitants in over 37 million people. It is obvious that the biggest population growth occured in the Soviet Union, and the smallest in the European Community.
It can be concluded that the popular density does not always go hand to hand with the growth rate of a country, as the Soviet Union showed the biggest growth and has the smallest popular density, Contrary to the case of the European Union, which had the lowest growth and has the most inhabitants per square kilometer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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... United States and the Soviet Union. The popular density of the European Union d...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...h of the United States during that same period of time was a little less than 30 million peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98367346939 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58010844737 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461224489796 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1399462142 49.2860985944 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.428571429 110.228320801 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 21.698381199 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 7.06452816374 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144547555994 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808061256381 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046895764482 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821939173584 0.162205337803 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217854254672 0.0443174109184 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.3589403974 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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