Subject : Global Warming Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard , explaning how they cast doubt on points made in the reading.
In the passage, the author identifies that global warming is the increasing earth tempature . The global warming reasons divide by two concepts. One of them is human induced warning, the other one is climate fluctutation.
In the lecture, the author believes that the global warming is occured by humans. Moreover, he gives some examples about this situation. For instance, he states that scientists have a evidence about carbondioxide leads to global warming and also he explains what Carbondioxide is. He mentions about it is greenhouse gase and creates the radiation so, this is harmful for human life. Furthermore, he focus on the industrial revolution issue which is the most important subject on global warming issue. Because, the industry sector companies gives the carbonxiode gases to the air and this case plays a big role to occur global warming.
The other reason of global warming, people uses harmful gases that raises the global warming. For example, they burn fosil fuel and wood product. These cases bring out climate changes and raise tempetaure.Finally, rising temperature produce global warming crisis.
However,in the passage,the writer doesn’t believe that the global is happened because of human. According to him, there is no evidence that human cause the global warming. He thinks that the human does not affect directly to global warming.
The global warming reasons divide by two concepts.
The reasons for global warming are divide by two concepts.
One of them is human induced warning, the other one is climate fluctutation.
One of them is human's induced warning, another one is climate fluctuation.
that scientists have a evidence about carbondioxide leads to global warming
that scientists have a evidence about carbon dioxide which leads to global warming
Sentence: In the passage, the author identifies that global warming is the increasing earth tempature .
Error: tempature Suggestion: mature
Sentence: One of them is human induced warning, the other one is climate fluctutation.
Error: fluctutation Suggestion: fluctuation
Sentence: In the lecture, the author believes that the global warming is occured by humans.
Error: occured Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For instance, he states that scientists have a evidence about carbondioxide leads to global warming and also he explains what Carbondioxide is.
Error: carbondioxide Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: He mentions about it is greenhouse gase and creates the radiation so, this is harmful for human life.
Error: gase Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Because, the industry sector companies gives the carbonxiode gases to the air and this case plays a big role to occur global warming.
Error: carbonxiode Suggestion: carbonize
Sentence: For example, they burn fosil fuel and wood product.
Error: fosil Suggestion: foil
Sentence: These cases bring out climate changes and raise tempetaure.Finally, rising temperature produce global warming crisis.
Error: tempetaure Suggestion: temperature
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
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para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 220 250
No. of Characters: 1114 1200
No. of Different Words: 129 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.064 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.476 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.377 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4