TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa

Both the article and the lecture discuss about the endotherm and body temperture of dinsur which lived in polar area and their body skeleton. In contrary the lecturer refutes the article which is implies that disnsur is endotherm.

First, the speaker contends that polar region was warmer than now. Hence, the dinsur might emigrate to warmer region in colder month. As suggested the reading passage, fossil have been found in polar domain which evidence supports that endotherm can survive in cold enviroment.

Second, the author present diffrent doubtful aspects of their movement however the narrative counters them with detailed analyaisis, which claim that their leg can carry more weight, as compared to reading represents that endotherm have their legs beside their body.

Third, the passage posits that their anatomy is similar, to endotherm which have dense bone Skeleton. This doesnot agree with speaking passage, which suggest that such a periodical growth would be beneficial.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 1373.03311258 62% => OK
No of words: 154.0 270.72406181 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52597402597 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.04702891845 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29459792242 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 145.348785872 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 419.366225166 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8921946969 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171815479921 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736058446781 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418606215345 0.0662205650399 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102931327741 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132093712405 0.0443174109184 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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