TPO-07 - Integrated Writing Task In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recyclin

The lecture and the reading passage give contradictory opinions on the topic of ecocertification, a form of accreditation conferred by an international agency in recognition of a company Eco-friendly practices. The passage explains that it is not necessary for American wood companies to pursue ecocertification while the lecture provides several counterarguments to this view.
First, reading states because of unreliable advertising in the united state if wood companies want to introduce their products with attracting labels, people don't believe and finally they won't be able to sell their products. In the lecture professor argues that in the united state people don't trust on advertising which product by companies which product them if an independent ecological agency testify certification of a specific product, they will trust and buy that.
Second, professor refutes second author claims which says American people don't buy ecocertified wood because of their expensiveness. Professor argues that people when prefer cheaper product which its price differences is more than 5 percent however about ecocertified wood prices is less than 5 percent.
Finally, reading says wood companies after getting ecocertified can export their production to rest country instead of domestic selling. professor says during time more and more people will purchase certificate woods in united states so if domestics wood companies attention to foreign consumers instead they will lose domestic market so it is wiser to don't allow foreign companies sell their ecocertified woods inter united states.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...products with attracting labels, people dont believe and finally they wont be able t...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts. In the lecture professor argues that in the united state people dont trust on...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...argues that in the united state people dont trust on advertising which product by c...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oduct by companies which product them if an independent ecological agency testify...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uthor claims which says American people dont buy ecocertified wood because of their ...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces is more than 5 percent however about ecocertified wood prices is less than 5 ...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Professor
...st country instead of domestic selling. professor says during time more and more people w...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...s in united states so if domestics wood companies attention to foreign consumers instead ...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... lose domestic market so it is wiser to dont allow foreign companies sell their ecoc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.313492063492 0.261695866417 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.150793650794 0.158904122519 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.119047619048 0.0723426182421 165% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0396825396825 0.0435111971325 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0277247811725 172% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126984126984 0.128828473217 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0198412698413 0.0370669169778 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09294216279 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0208969081088 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0595238095238 0.128158765124 46% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015873015873 0.0158828679856 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0198412698413 0.0114777025283 173% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1595.0 1645.83664459 97% => OK
No of words: 238.0 271.125827815 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.70168067227 6.08160592843 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.466386554622 0.374372842146 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.361344537815 0.287516216867 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231092436975 0.187439937562 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172268907563 0.113142543107 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09294216279 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.539623497131 104% => OK
Word variations: 54.8217805077 53.8517498576 102% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 29.75 21.7502111507 137% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9361601803 49.3711431718 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.375 132.220823453 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 21.7502111507 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.878197800319 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.39072847682 265% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.8844537815 50.5018328374 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.93333333333 1.90840788429 101% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.569889393774 0.549887131256 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142874620735 0.142949733639 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0554230561812 0.0787303798458 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.699043060168 0.631733273073 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0957916107873 0.139662658121 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255360806102 0.266732575781 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984200843223 0.103435571967 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.207347896908 0.414875509568 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0451139014044 0.0530846634433 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338251441759 0.40443939384 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988862775292 0.0528353158467 187% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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