TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki

The reading passage contends that three ideas are claimed by critics against the accuracy of the memoir about Chevalier de Seingalt who wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. On the other hand, the lecturer brings about several points that contradict this argument.
First of all, the lecturer questions the idea in the reading passage that the memoir is not reasonable which is the evidence that considerable sums of money from a Swiss merchant had borrowed by the Chevalier. This is attributed to the fact that he was very wealth with properties. He sold his properties he had and spent considerable sums of money in order to gamble. Thus, the reading passage’s first idea is invalid.
Moreover, the lecturer casts doubt on the idea made by the reading passage that the conversations that the Chevalier records in the memoir between himself and the famous writer Voltaire are not accurate at the views of critics. This is because that it is true they, Chevalier and Voltaire, had met and conversed many times at night. And he did write a note each night regularly when they conserved. Consequently, the reading passage’s second point is refuted.
Last but not least, the lecturer disagrees with the idea made in the reading passage that the memoir’s account of the Chevalier’s escape from a notorious prison in Venice, Italy is questioned by critics. It is obvious that according to government document, the prison would be repaired due to the fact that it was too old. As a result, with such reasoning, the reading passage’s last idea is contradicted.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271844660194 0.261695866417 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.135922330097 0.158904122519 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.084142394822 0.0723426182421 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323624595469 0.0435111971325 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388349514563 0.0277247811725 140% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129449838188 0.128828473217 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0388349514563 0.0370669169778 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91263002839 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0129449838188 0.0208969081088 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.126213592233 0.128158765124 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00323624595469 0.0158828679856 20% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129449838188 0.0114777025283 113% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1598.0 1645.83664459 97% => OK
No of words: 264.0 271.125827815 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05303030303 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344696969697 0.374372842146 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287878787879 0.287516216867 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19696969697 0.187439937562 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132575757576 0.113142543107 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91263002839 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 51.7539724005 53.8517498576 96% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3076923077 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3767104993 49.3711431718 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 132.220823453 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 49.0955710956 50.5018328374 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.125 1.90840788429 111% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.730272730508 0.549887131256 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138282918001 0.142949733639 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0788800030766 0.0787303798458 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575335927382 0.631733273073 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179005137116 0.139662658121 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.316970609398 0.266732575781 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183191341259 0.103435571967 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479163648014 0.414875509568 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0701974857369 0.0530846634433 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.570347575932 0.40443939384 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345873138592 0.0528353158467 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.