The article states that Chevalier distirted or invented many events in his memoir and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that though there is no accuarte memoir can be written, The Chevaloir's memoir is pretty accurate and can be a reliable source. And she refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading avers that evidence that suggested Chevalier borrowed significant amount of money from a swiss merchant while living in Switzerland. conversely, the professor opooses this point by stating that taking loan does not mean that you are a poor, She also explains during Chevalier living in Switzerland, he needed to spent a huge amount of money on parties and events. When his properties sold, it took few days to get the money. So, he borrowed some cash money to do his activity while he was waiting from his money to be available. The professor concludes that he was not poor at all.
Second, the article claims that critics are skeptical about the accuaracy of his conversation with the famous writer Voltaire. The professor, on the other hand, says that Chaveloir had mentioned that every night after he met Voltaire, he wrote down every converastions that he remembered. By keeping these notes, he was able to write them after many years. Also, she adds that there is a solid evidence that conversations that Chevalier did with journalists verify the accuarcy of these notes.
Third, the reading posits that critis questioned the escaping story of Chevalier from the notorious prison in Venice by bribing the jailers. The professor refutes this point by stating that other prosioners were more powerful than Chevalier but they could not able to bribe the jailers. However, there is a documents from Venice that support the Chevalier's escaping method. This document states that Soon after the escaping of Chevalier, a celing prison was replaced. This means, unless he escaped from this prison as the was he described, There is no need to fix the celing of the prison.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conversely
...s merchant while living in Switzerland. conversely, the professor opooses this point by st...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... concludes that he was not poor at all. Second, the article claims that critics ...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a documents'?
Suggestion: there are a documents
...not able to bribe the jailers. However, there is a documents from Venice that support the Chevaliers...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a document' or simply 'documents'?
Suggestion: a document; documents
...to bribe the jailers. However, there is a documents from Venice that support the Chevaliers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1373.03311258 123% => OK
No of words: 335.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03582089552 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5731100875 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2455459372 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2352941176 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429283246707 0.272083759551 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127273382509 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571042145659 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233207769036 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272585911803 0.0443174109184 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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